I love the picture of Jack in a sarong, enjoying paradise! I can see it so clearly!
Just beautiful as always, with your wonderful, evocative prose, always just the right image.
Though Jack officially sailed out from Shipwreck Cove as quartermaster of the Notus, he remained the real power behind the infancy of her captaincy.
He doesn't mind being her second, does he? Not an alpha type, he's happy to take the second place to someone he loves. He wants to be appreciated and admired, as Elizabeth pointed out in DMC. He doesn't want power.
This was shamelessly inspired by a picture of Johnny Depp in a sarong in last week's People. My poor, heat addled brain decided to run with it.
You're so right about his not wanting power. In a way, though, he's making his immortality through her: he teaches her his ways of doing things and eventually, she will pass those on as well. It sure beats having your heart cut out. Not to mention, sharing the voyage as her quartermaster is still more fun than sailing alone as captain.
That pictures was partially responsible for the babboons that seem to have eaten my brain. I started gibbering at the page. I swear, it's the heat...
I think this voyage was a nice way to start repairing the damage of the whole killed and fed to the kraken. It's also a chance to get to know each other outside of the series of never-ending crisises. Plus, the pictures of the Society Islands just seemed a perfect place to set down for repairs and have a bit of a safe interlude.
Writing this certainly beat reality: 90+ degrees, no air conditioning, and I'd sell my soul for a breeze right now. You definitely should see if you can find the picture of JD in People mag in said sarong. I'd scan it if only I'd unpacked my scanner.
Liz is chosing her own course and occasionally being Jack's woman has some great perks, kind of like being King. It's good to be King.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping this will break my writer's block.
In Germany, it's rather cool at the moment ... no trace of summer, yet, but hopefully, the weather will improve this weekend.
I've already seen the pic of Johnny in said sarong - very inspiring, that's for sure ;)
I am suffering from writer's block, too ... I really need to finish Chapter 15 of "Cape of the Sinner's Tongue", but it just won't come out the way I want it to. Maybe I should try to write something different for now and see where to go from there.
she slowly began to realize whom Elizabeth the woman was. In the quiet of the great cabin, she was no one’s daughter nor any man’s wife, but sister to all the crew and lover to only Jack and the boundless sea.
What I love about this ship is that it allows for something that Willabeth and Norribeth(?) don't -- for Elizabeth to be her own woman, on her own terms, not defined by her father, husband, station... etc.
I think maybe that's what originally attracted me to the ship; it's a little bit unconventional, but it's a very independant pairing. Nothing's expected except honesty.
I'm quite keen on the idea of the sea as the lover Elizabeth is most faithful too, much like Jack/Pearl.
He's not quite in the background; the crew knows who's really in charge, but most of them know Jack or have sailed with him before and are letting Bess keep her illusions. Really, they're sort of co-captains and he's certainly still introducing himself as Captain Jack Sparrow, just sailing under the Pirate King's colours for the time being.
Plus, Jack knows that the quartermaster's the ship's real power when they're not in battle. Bess is better in a crisis situation, but he's better with the munitae of day to day ship running. It really works nearly perfectly.
Have you see the photo from People? Pure insiration, I tell you. I think djarum99 has a most glorious icon of it. Anyhow, thank you so much for your comment :)
Shanghai Noon= great movie. I can also see bits of Jack there.
the quartermaster's the ship's real power when they're not in battle
Uhm... After having pitched headlong into 'Pirates' fanfiction I've been looking up a few nautical terms and such and have landed on this site. It doesn't give such a favourable account of the quartermaster's rank.
I also dimly remember having read about Sir Francis Drake's quartermaster as one of the ship's carpenters whose job merely was to represent the crew in formal decisions and to hold a place in a jury, should one happen to be held (in cases of Drake it was the conviction and beheading of Sir Thomas Doughty).
True? Ludicrous? Could you point me a to other websites on this topic, please?
It's my guess that this was not true in the Navy, whatsoever. I did notice, on the page you linked me, that the quartermaster received the same shares as the captain on Roberts' ship.
It's an interesting point made; I'm definitely going to have to look further into it. Essentially everything I've read is to the contrary, but I would be very interested in seeing what else I can dig up on this.
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Just beautiful as always, with your wonderful, evocative prose, always just the right image.
Though Jack officially sailed out from Shipwreck Cove as quartermaster of the Notus, he remained the real power behind the infancy of her captaincy.
He doesn't mind being her second, does he? Not an alpha type, he's happy to take the second place to someone he loves. He wants to be appreciated and admired, as Elizabeth pointed out in DMC. He doesn't want power.
Very, very slick!
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You're so right about his not wanting power. In a way, though, he's making his immortality through her: he teaches her his ways of doing things and eventually, she will pass those on as well. It sure beats having your heart cut out. Not to mention, sharing the voyage as her quartermaster is still more fun than sailing alone as captain.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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And Jack could use a touch of paradise himself, after the last couple of years. He would love this.
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I think this voyage was a nice way to start repairing the damage of the whole killed and fed to the kraken. It's also a chance to get to know each other outside of the series of never-ending crisises. Plus, the pictures of the Society Islands just seemed a perfect place to set down for repairs and have a bit of a safe interlude.
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I also loved your portrayal of Captain Lizzie! A strong, independent woman, and yet "Jack's woman".
Great work, I enjoyed every line of it! Thanks a lot for sharing.
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Liz is chosing her own course and occasionally being Jack's woman has some great perks, kind of like being King. It's good to be King.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping this will break my writer's block.
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I've already seen the pic of Johnny in said sarong - very inspiring, that's for sure ;)
I am suffering from writer's block, too ... I really need to finish Chapter 15 of "Cape of the Sinner's Tongue", but it just won't come out the way I want it to. Maybe I should try to write something different for now and see where to go from there.
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I'd gladly trade. It's 33ish here and dead calm. At least tomorrow, I'll be at the beach instead of sweltering.
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measuring her steps to independence in turns of the callipers on faded maps, and viewing her future in the sun through the sextant
I also just looked up that picture of Johnny in a sarong...
*wibble*
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That picture should be listed as an official inspiration.
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... indeed... *sigh*
she slowly began to realize whom Elizabeth the woman was. In the quiet of the great cabin, she was no one’s daughter nor any man’s wife, but sister to all the crew and lover to only Jack and the boundless sea.
What I love about this ship is that it allows for something that Willabeth and Norribeth(?) don't -- for Elizabeth to be her own woman, on her own terms, not defined by her father, husband, station... etc.
Just beautiful!
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I'm quite keen on the idea of the sea as the lover Elizabeth is most faithful too, much like Jack/Pearl.
Glad you enjoyed :)
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This is goodness. Fluffy, but not too fluffy. And Jack's characterization ...
I like the idea of him being anything else than a captain, although I'd miss his almost proverbial 'Captain. Captain Jack Sparrow ( ... )
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Plus, Jack knows that the quartermaster's the ship's real power when they're not in battle. Bess is better in a crisis situation, but he's better with the munitae of day to day ship running. It really works nearly perfectly.
Have you see the photo from People? Pure insiration, I tell you. I think djarum99 has a most glorious icon of it. Anyhow, thank you so much for your comment :)
Shanghai Noon= great movie. I can also see bits of Jack there.
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Uhm... After having pitched headlong into 'Pirates' fanfiction I've been looking up a few nautical terms and such and have landed on this site. It doesn't give such a favourable account of the quartermaster's rank.
I also dimly remember having read about Sir Francis Drake's quartermaster as one of the ship's carpenters whose job merely was to represent the crew in formal decisions and to hold a place in a jury, should one happen to be held (in cases of Drake it was the conviction and beheading of Sir Thomas Doughty).
True? Ludicrous? Could you point me a to other websites on this topic, please?
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It's an interesting point made; I'm definitely going to have to look further into it. Essentially everything I've read is to the contrary, but I would be very interested in seeing what else I can dig up on this.
Links!
http://www.kipar.org/piratical-resources/index.html
This is one of my favourites. It has a great chart of sea times.
I also use Wikipedia for quick checks and I have a range of books here, including Under the Black Flag that I use as reference materials.
I'll have to see if I can find anything else for you.
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