Fourth Avenue Café - Chapter 17

[neko_fish]

Title: Fourth Avenue Café
Pairings: Akame, slight Ryopi
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jin's a successful artist when a fight with his friends forces him to seek stress relief in a little café where he meets what he considers, the strangest people.

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Comments

[quinnsan]

D= Kame~

I didn't really cry much at seeing his death for some reason, I guess I knew it was coming and subconciously prepared myself for it.

But poor Jin, its so heart breaking seeing him like that.

[epicwaters]

oh so sad :( and since I've also experienced close personal loss, it made me cry when jin made the observation that the world kept going. its amazing how selfish you become when you lose someone precious

so sad!! how is jin going to get out of this? :(.. I wonder how ueda is doing though. he and kame were pretty close too. argh...

thanks for sharing! *teary smile*

[eddictedd]

i thought there might be a miracle or something and kame wouldn't die, but he did T______________T

[jhisksan]

poor jin... kame just had to go...
if only jin would remember how he saved kame, the pieces of his broken soul would mend back...
*hugs jin*

[kuroiusagi93]

Well... there goes hoping some miracle would happen ^^;;

Really though, this chapter made me cry buckets. Imagining Jin seeing Kame everyday, and not being able to help him, it's heartbreaking T.T
I love how Jin tried to keep his promise, but in the end he couldn't help but cry >.<
Weird thing is, when Kame was dying, I wasn't crying much, but I started crying like crazy at the funeral part ;_;

It's nice that you were able to give the story a more real feel to it by using personal experience :) Hope it didn't bring up too bad memories though :(