A disappearence into thin air

[neithee26]

Hi everyone! I'm back with my new Sentinel fanficton. Please be gentle, but I'll be thankful for any ideas and, of course, constructive critic. English isn't my first language. Sorry for any mistakes which I made, although it was beta read by Brynn87 who I thank from the bottom of the heart for amazing beta job and reading in my mind.

Brynn,

Comments

[tommyboybbi]

Nice Story, and great Jim angst. Don't forget to explore LJ for sentinel communities, we have several communities here. They are a great group of people. Welcome aboard.

[neithee26]

Thanks, I'm really happy that you liked it

[brynnh87]

Hey, it turned out really well. Thanks for the birthday gift.

[neithee26]

yeah, you're right, Brynn. You're welcome and thanks for your help :)