Fic: Endings

[nectocaris]

Title: Endings
Fandom: Hockey RPS // Chicago Blackhawks
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jonathan Toews/Patrick Kane
Words: 1944
Notes: Idea for this fic was stolen from the Margaret Atwood story, Happy Endings. A HUGE thank you goes out to my beta bwinchester who made this fic into something vaguely intelligible. <3   
Summary: How Jonny and Pat get together, or don't.

Comments

[parametre]

Gah, this is gorgeous, and just the right side of angsty. It made me hurt but it also made me smile. ♥

[nectocaris]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it. Believe me, it hurt to write it over the past few months. Oh, boys.

[yakbites]

Oh. My god.

This is something else, this is.

[nectocaris]

I'm assuming this is a good thing, yes? ♥

[yakbites]

Yeah.

So cool so cool so enviably cool.

[nectocaris]

Those are my thoughts exactly about you. 'Don't Run Into a Burning Building'? Orgasmically fantastic. And your Campoli/Crawford fic? I absolutely adore that one. This is pretty much me saying, I stalk you, quietly and in secret. Hope that's not creepy.

But seriously, though, I just love your style. The voices are spot on and the language is so clean and I would kill for your transition ability. Clearly, I need to comment more--and not just in my head.

[myosotis_love]

Wow... I'm not quite sure what to say apart from that. The format, the little stories, the details, the touches of angst... everything came together so well. I love this! Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of work~! :D

[nectocaris]

I am so happy to finally have this out of my 'Stuff That's a Revision Away From Finished But I'm Too Neurotic to Show it to the Internets' folder. It's a long summer so hopefully there'll be more than just this. I'm glad you liked it! :)

[supaho30]

Umm, wow. So much angst, even when the boys weren't aware of it. My heart clinched a little harder at each one.

That's not the end of the story. It's only the beginning. I love this line. In fact, I loved this whole ending! I choose this one. :)

[nectocaris]

This pairing lends itself to so much angst for me. Ah, the potential. Especially now that Toews has a girlfriend (supposedly).

I dunno. Call me a masochist, but I kind of like the stories where they're so close to ending up together but something gets in the way. Of course, I love the ones where they're completely in love too, but there's something about angst that's so satisfying to read. Thanks for commenting!

[chica_charlie]

Wow. That was incredible. ♥_____♥ Absolutely love the style.

[nectocaris]

<3 Thanks! Style = completely stolen. Happy Endings is such a good story with a really cool concept--I just couldn't not use it for evil slashy fic purposes. :)