Fic: Disconnect

[nebari_rebel]

Title: Disconnect
Word Count: 444
Rated: PG
Setting: DWTB
Characters: Aeryn Sun, Chiana
Summary: Under the seams runs the pain. - Anne Carson

Comments

[misaditas]

This still breaks my heart :(

[nebari_rebel]

xoxoxox

Thank you for your encouragement :)

[charlie_bz]

Fantastic! So much I love about this. Firstly, Aeryn and Chi...their relationship makes me happy. Secondly, I love the hints (unless I'm reading more into it) that Talyn and Crais maybe survived.

[nebari_rebel]

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it :) And yes, there are hints because I'm in the "Of COURSE Crais and Talyn survived, silly!" club ;)

[zardi]

Interesting...you think Aeryn would have expected John and Chiana to get together? I never thought of it that way, that Aeryn would suspect it. But I have wondered whether -- if TJohn had lived and returned to Moya, and Aeryn had remained with him -- if MJohn would have ever given up on Aeryn. Though that would require Aeryn knowingly hurting MJohn, and I don't know if she could do that with both Johns alive and well in front of her.

Anyway. End of ramble. Very interesting fic. I like Aeryn and Chi together :)

[olegscape]

That's one of my favorite places of the fic, and I think that's very Aeryn. Technically, she already hurt MJohn by getting together with TJohn, so had they both returned to Moya he would've been hurt.

I like this moment because she thinks of him, doesn't want him to be alone, and that shows that she thinks she's probably leaving for good.

[zardi]

I like this moment because she thinks of him, doesn't want him to be alone...

True. One of the things I hate most about the TJohn episodes is that I feel like MJohn has been forgotten. I kind of like the idea that Aeryn expected him to get together with Chiana so that he wouldn't be alone.

[nebari_rebel]

Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you found it interesting (love your thinky-John icon LOL).

Interesting...you think Aeryn would have expected John and Chiana to get together? I never thought of it that way, that Aeryn would suspect it. But I have wondered whether -- if TJohn had lived and returned to Moya, and Aeryn had remained with him -- if MJohn would have ever given up on Aeryn. Though that would require Aeryn knowingly hurting MJohn, and I don't know if she could do that with both Johns alive and well in front of her.It is complicated...I think that once Aeryn made her decision to be with TJ completely - to the point where they were going to run off to earth together, apparently leaving MJ behind without a second glance - she wouldn't have felt she had any claim on MJ, and it probably would have annoyed her if he felt he had a claim on her. TJ was John, her heart, and MJ was something else she didn't really want think about or feel deeply for (hence her running away in DWTB, although I also think that was heavily

[olegscape]

Good fic! I'm glad you decided to post it.

[nebari_rebel]

Thanks, Oleg! And for listening to me whine about it LOL

[olegscape]

Welcome ;) Whine? I didn't notice :D

[kernezelda]

I like this, the physical details like the thin red line of Aeryn's mouth, their fingers drawing in the dust, how far the hangar bay is from Moya's heart, baby Talyn's warmth. It feels like a conversation that could really happen.

[nebari_rebel]

Thank you so much for the kind feedback!