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vamp926 in ncis_lfws

Session 4: Round 1 Results

Feb 01, 2010 22:23

So, I would say that was rather successful! Almost everyone got their stuff in, and we had a ton of votes, which makes me happy. Which is good for you, because you want your mod to be happy... :D

( And now, onto the winners! )

session 4, round 1, results

Comments 24

threnody February 2 2010, 03:29:00 UTC

Discussion post would be awesome. There are a few stories I really liked but in the end There Can Be Only One, so...

meekosan February 2 2010, 03:49:34 UTC

Comments please :'(

vamp926 February 2 2010, 15:39:24 UTC

Least Favorite and Why(-2): A Fire and Nod - I felt there could have been more to this - maybe if it had focused solely on one character's thoughts, rather than trying to capture them all. I wasn't too sure what the author was trying to say, and a few of the descriptions were a little clunky, and there were some discrepancies in tenses that threw me out of the story a little.

Least Favorite- A Fire and Nod- it kept switching tenses, kepts switching point of view, there was sentence fragments, and the characterization wasn't even right.

Least Favorite and Why(-2): A fire and nod. Well it was a toss up, all the stories were good so I picked one that was less good. Picked this one because it wasn't as well written as the others and I couldn't imagine this scene as a must have ending.

emeraldsong February 2 2010, 04:03:56 UTC

Wow...did *not* expect that!! :-) Thank you everyone who voted! Yes, comments por favor.

Love the idea of a discussion post, too. Great idea!

little_ozzo February 2 2010, 09:04:34 UTC

Just to say congratulations! I loved the way you structured your fic around the three lessons, and the almost-detached descriptions of the blood made it quite horrific (in a good way!) :-)

vamp926 February 2 2010, 15:41:19 UTC

give an honorable mention (and I wish I could give points) to Three Lessons for the outstanding use of the blood imagery ( ... )

emeraldsong February 2 2010, 18:39:47 UTC

Thank you so much for posting these, and to everyone who commented!!

chicklet_girl February 2 2010, 04:14:28 UTC

I think a discussion post would be very interesting!

(And I doubt I got any comments, but on the off-chance I did, I'd like to see them. *g*)

vamp926 February 2 2010, 15:42:49 UTC

No comments.

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vamp926 February 2 2010, 15:44:03 UTC

Favorite and Why(+2): Ghosts in the Elevator - This was a really interesting idea to show Abby's POV on Ziva leaving, and I think the writer really managed to capture a sense of her liveliness in their descriptions and use of metaphors - there were a couple of teeny tiny typos/errors but I skipped happily over them because Abby is a lot of fun, even when she's sad and confused like she is here. And I really liked the mentions of Tony turning his phone over in his hands, it was a great moment of show-not-tell to explain his feelings and distress. Really good, in-character stuff ( ... )

emeraldsong February 2 2010, 18:42:58 UTC

I need to echo that comment about the best opening line! I'm glad to know now that we can give out honorable mentions, b/c I would have been all over this one. :-) The mood and imagery were fantastic, and the characters spot-on. Beautiful job!