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Truth and Consequences by TwoWeevils

Nov 12, 2005 16:43

Challenge: "Flash" -- a story written in 60 min or less.
Author: twoweevils...actually Mweevil. K did a light beta, but shouldn't get any of the blame.
Category: Gen
Pairing: None
Spoilers: Kill Ari
Summary: You can't hide much from a Senior Field Agent.
Notes: Clocked in at 48 minutes.

( Truth and Consequences )

challenge: flash, writer: twoweevils

Comments 28

malnpudl November 12 2005, 22:02:39 UTC

Oh, ouch.

That's good. That's very, very good.

Great ep tag.

twoweevils November 14 2005, 13:59:40 UTC

Thank you! Just want to hug Tony and feed him milk and cookies.

M.

spikedluv November 12 2005, 23:08:45 UTC

Ugh. Did you read my mind? I love how Tony found out, by looking at the evidence, but I'm still wondering how that knowledge will affect him. Him and Gibbs, him and Ziva. If you wanted to write more of this, I wouldn't say no to it. *g*

twoweevils November 14 2005, 14:01:09 UTC

I swear, I stopped reading minds after I got fined that time in Atlantic City!

*grin* I'm glad you liked it!

M.

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twoweevils November 14 2005, 14:02:14 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for commenting!

M.

pixie_on_acid November 13 2005, 02:22:27 UTC

Well done. Rule one of getting away with things: never try to sneak inconsistencies past an ex-cop. It only makes them curious.

Not that he'd ever say anything... you really do get the idea that Tony is good at keeping important secrets.

twoweevils November 14 2005, 14:03:45 UTC

Thank you! You just know that Tony would be like a dog with a rat until he found out what was going on -- even if he didn't like the answer.

M.

webbgirl November 13 2005, 06:02:44 UTC

Wow. That was so perfect that it hurt.

Great Tony insight.

twoweevils November 14 2005, 14:04:37 UTC

That was so perfect that it hurt.

*arranges for Tony to kiss it better*

Thank you!

M.