The Rookie by pixie_on_acid

[pixie_on_acid]

Title: The Rookie

Author: pixie_on_acidSummary: Tony 's world turns upside-down, and he loses his innocence

Comments

[gibbsgirl]

Wonderful story. You capture Tony so very well.

[pixie_on_acid]

Thank you... I was a litte worried about that with this one, because it doesn't have the 'happy-go-lucky' sense he so often presents.

I'm glad you like it.

[goodisrelative]

Very good! and I love the last line... where can I find the story that begins at this one's end?

[goodisrelative]

Yeah... Yeah... Some times it helps not to have the screen brightness/contrast so dark that I can see the links!

So I answered my own stupid question on the where.

[goodisrelative]

I loved the darkness of Talk Therapy. It was great and I'm glad I read this one first though and then Talk Therapy because I knew who Tony went to talk to immediately. I loved the end where you talk aout why Tony went to see the Priest and talk to him... about not hurting anyone else with the darkness and then describing Tony as the "bad" vampire for warming himself in the sun... Excellent imagery!

[pixie_on_acid]

Before the cut, I've got a link... just go to the words 'Talk Therapy' and click.

:D

[thekatebeyond]

Yay! (I have nothing else constructive to add. I'm just excited you did this!)

[crimsonquills]

Wow. That was really, really good. Father Linden was so creepy, so calm, that my reactions to him made me completely and totally identify with Tony. There were so many good lines in this, so many good visual moments, and visceral moments, that I can't isolate them from each other. Excellent stuff. Thanks so much for sharing with us!

[malnpudl]

Ooh, that's good. Father Linden is, indeed, wonderfully creepy, and I really like the look at Tony the rookie. Hope you'll be inspired to write more for the community!

One brief admin request: Would you please edit your post and put your byline in the Subject line? For archiving in the community Memories, we'd like to have all fic posts read "Title by Author". Thanks!

Thank you

[pixie_on_acid]

Thank you... and I'm sorry about the subject line. I missed that part when I read the rules... it's fixed now. Thank you for letting me know.