Gone Are The Days (3/6)

[nblaque_impala]

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[maguie]

Jensen: What am I supposed to do? He thinks that I mean it all - said that it would all have come out sooner or later. How can he even think that?"
Donna: "Because there was nobody there to tell him otherwise, baby,"

:'( this was so sad....

Hey can I ask you something? In this paragraph:
"We were supposed to meet at the park," He admitted quietly, for the first time since it had happened, and bit his lip against the strong sting of tears. "I can't remember why - we used to do it all of the time. Sneak out of foster homes and meet up, used to joke that nothing could keep us apart. He got there, and he looked worried, and I guess I panicked."

Jensen said that the mean things he said to Jared was probably because he was jealous, that Jared was becoming more distant and he was afraid he would forget him soon, and in this paragraph he said Jared got to the park and he looked worried and Jensen panicked,,, why did he panicked?
ok so he panicked and then said the mean things to Jared?

[nblaque_impala]

Jensen panicked because he thought that Jared was going to tell him that they couldn't hang out anymore/couldn't be friends anymore etc. I probably should have explained that better >.< Sorry!

[maguie]

Oh no your story is great, is just English is not my first language, and sometimes there are parts that I've doubts :)

[nblaque_impala]

That's alright, I'm glad that I managed to clear it up for you :)