Comments | nattieb: Fic: Homecoming 1/1

nattieb

Fic: Homecoming 1/1

Jan 19, 2009 07:51

Title: Homecoming
Character(s): Rose, Ten II
Pairing(s): Ten II /Rose
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Setting/Spoilers: Spoilers up through Journey's end
Summary: After six weeks away Rose expected her homecoming to be just a bit different.

Written for heather916 who is brilliant, wonderful, amazing, and so many other adjectives that I can't think of them. So ( Read more... )

fanfic, doctor who

Comments 31

amberfocus January 19 2009, 15:21:43 UTC

I missed a typo. There's two offs in this sentence:

“Oh great, so now my wife thinks I’m ridiculous,” he shouted throwing off her hand off and standing up.

Still very cute and sweet.

nattieb January 19 2009, 15:27:54 UTC

Thanks for catching that. I have fixed it.

And thanks again!

heather916 January 20 2009, 19:37:38 UTC

Thank you for your beta of my little fic present. :) Every sickie mommy deserves some fluffly Whofic when dealing with recovering-sickie kids.

ladychi January 19 2009, 17:17:43 UTC

*laughs* That was very sweet!

nattieb January 19 2009, 20:04:47 UTC

Why thank you.

justlook3 January 19 2009, 17:32:42 UTC

He! That was great, so sweet and funny.

nattieb January 19 2009, 20:04:30 UTC

Thanks, I am glad that you enjoyed it,

captain91 January 19 2009, 19:45:42 UTC

lol. very sweet
and he really can't look after himself!

nattieb January 19 2009, 20:04:09 UTC

Nope, he can't. But he has the Tylers now so it is okay.

rosewarren January 19 2009, 20:19:00 UTC

She gave her stunned husband one more quick kiss and headed to the kitchen to prepare the meal and found only a half empty jar of jam and a banana.

Wait, how long was she gone? :)
*squishes them both*

nattieb January 20 2009, 03:47:57 UTC

*squishes them too*

He may never admit it but he needs Jackie Tyler in his life. He might have run out of jelly and bananas without her.