Alphabet (C, D)

[narya86]

Title: Alphabet (C, D)
Parts: A | B | E | F | G | H | I | J | K | L | M | N | O | P | Q | R | S | T | U | V | W | X | Y | Z
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: R, PG
Disclaimer: It sucks always having to come up with new ways to say how much they don't belong to me.
Summary: Part of the Alphabet Challenge.
A/N: I kind of feel like I

Comments

[lady_quark]

Ah!
So the first one was intense and I liked it (/shallow comment of a greedy reader, I'd have loved to read more of that verse ;) ) but the second one.
The second one.

Firstly, I'm blown away by the idea of describing the dancing scene not in words and movements but in their story and just. I stopped breathing for a moment there. It's just literally so good. And secondly, I can't even begin to tell you how generally lovely the imagery is, both of them getting lost in the music and caught up in their story and Xabi is just so lucky to be able to witness that. No really, 'Dance' is breathtakingly beautiful.
Very very very well done (as always)!

[narya86]

To be honest, I'd love to write more in that verse... I actually have a bit of a plot, but, you know how it is... ^^

Aaww thank you. :D I had a hard time describing the dance, it took me literally weeks to figure out how to do it. But then when I had the idea it kind of flowed. ;)

Thanks a lot to you! :)

[alana2x1]

Ahhhh two amazing fics! Your writing ability and just general scope never ever fails to amaze me.

The first one came across so vivid to me. I almost felt like a fly on the wall. Everything, right down to Fernando's sunburn, just so there, burned behind my eyes, if you like, the whole time whilst I was reading. Really enjoyed it and I like that it had a nice hopeful ending :)

The second one. There just aren't words. I got completely lost in the details whilst reading this one. First off the idea of Dan, Fernando and Xabi dancing is just... off the scale, lol. Then the way you told it through their story and left us feeling just the way they were feeling towards the end. Just magnificent!

Some exceptional work here! Thank you for sharing, as always :D

[narya86]

Aaaww thank you so much! :D

Fernando really was pretty lucky that it was Dan who picked him... in my head he even had a valid reason to. *cough*

I so agree about the mental image of them dancing. ;) I'd pay a shitload of money to see that!

[sophie_lfc]

<3333333333333 agsjagdkadjahdjdjsksgashd I CANNOT EVEN. OMG OMFG that was beautiful. <3

[narya86]

Hahaha thank you I guess? ^^

[sophie_lfc]

Sorry for that, well, ecstatic comment^^
You're welcome, the fics were awesome! :)

[narya86]

Haha, don't apologise, I was absolutely happy about it! :)

[thopix]

You made my day :D

The first one feels like the epilogue for something epic...

In the second one the way you described the dance was just perfect . It was like be there watching them dance. As if this was only the beginning because they're meant to dance together forever. So romantic!!

[narya86]

Heh, the prologue you mean? ^^ I agree, this could be something much longer... and I'd love to write more in that verse, to be honest, I have a few ideas. But I still need to get back into my writing groove, I haven't written anything on my own for a really long time now. :-/

they're meant to dance together forever They are, aren't they? *sigh*

[jumping_down]

I love how this alphabet challenge is making you come up with so many new prompts. I love the idea of Fernando and Dan as dancers!

[narya86]

It was the perfect opportunity to go all out on insane AUs. *g*

Btw, how about our story? I'm home pretty much every morning now...?

[jumping_down]

I'm free tomorrow. I'll send you a comment here when I'm online.

Also, I'm finishing a project this week, but I should be much more free next week. :)

[jumping_down]

I'M HERE I'M HEREEEE. YOU?