Align My Heart, Body And Mind

[narya86]

Title: Align My Heart, Body And Mind
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I’m very happy with the fact that they're only based on real people... (Dan, I still love you.)
Summary: “I’m trying to get over you.”
A/N: Inspired to one half by the life of Stieg Larsson and to one half by a Supernatural quote. Talk about strange

Comments

[vicky86x]

oh, this just broke my heart, this is soooo sad!

I think it might be worse if they just can't be together, though they still love each other, than if one just doesn't love the other anymore. Like this it's just so much more difficult to move on, and it's quite obvious that neither of them has managed that yet! which makes everything even more complicated

I love that they still seem to have some kind of routine, though they are not together anymore, Dan shows up and they end up like this, curled up in bed. But I also think that you manage really well to show the difference between their "relationship" now and the way they've been around each other back then.

You should know by now, that I really, really like your writing, but this isn't just great because it's well written, I actually like the ides of the story as well. Dan being a writer writing about hidden agendas, about corruption in politics, but more often than not about right wing radicalism and fascism to the point of his name appearing on one of those death lists on the

[narya86]

Oh wow, thank you so much for this! ♥

You're right, neither of them is able to move on from the other here, and that's why they're both suffering. Fernando can't understand why it has to be like this and I'm afraid Dan is (until now) still too idealistic.

I'm really glad you liked both the style and the plot I used here, I wasn't too sure if everything would be understandable.

And don't apologise!! I'm just glad to have reminded you since your comments really mean a lot to me. :)

[sunandtheshade]

One of the best I've read all year- really love the forbidden-love concept!

[narya86]

Aawww wow, thanks a lot for this!! It really means a lot to me since it was a bit experimental and there weren't too many people who commented on it. So double thanks to you. ♥

[bbbojanfan]

wow... your stories are really great!!

[narya86]

Aaww thanks. :) Do you mean this story, or have you already read more?

[bbbojanfan]

I've read a few of them and I really like the way you wright this pairing.

[narya86]

That's so great to hear, thanks a lot! :D