Align My Heart, Body And Mind

[narya86]

Title: Align My Heart, Body And Mind
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I’m very happy with the fact that they're only based on real people... (Dan, I still love you.)
Summary: “I’m trying to get over you.”
A/N: Inspired to one half by the life of Stieg Larsson and to one half by a Supernatural quote. Talk about strange

Comments

[tetila]

I really like the new writing style.

My poor boys :(

Can I have fluff now?

[narya86]

I knooow, I felt sorry for them too. :(

Fluff would be awesome.

[izzyme]

I still can't get over how good your writing is! absolutely amazing, their relationship in this one really got to me and I really feel for them

[narya86]

Wow, thanks! :D I guess it's hard not to feel for them in these circumstances.

[mrs_bugaboo]

Oh god this is so emotional
I like how you write them, they are so understandable and sensual.
It's like even in their pain, they are perfect

[narya86]

even in their pain, they are perfect Right?? *sigh*

I guess this was always going to be heart-breaky, but it turned out a little more so than I had intended. Thank you anyway. :)

[little59mermaid]

Wow. I've been already missing your writing, but this fic was definitely worth waiting for. Seriously, it was so beautifully written, I really liked the new style. I don't even know which part to point up since I loved it from the beggining to the very end.
I liked the way we'd been thrown in the middle of their lifestory, without any set ups or explanations...when the present was intertwined with the past through Fernando's memories. It was really intense.
And the last paragraph was pure perfection. I really liked the way the fic begun with Fernando opening the door and then, at the end, when the two of them were only separated by the door... it was like it sumed up their whole story... like they still wanted to be together but something was standing in their way, pre-empting them from being complete...
Well, it seems like I'm unable to come up with better words this story so much deserves. Just want to let you know that I really really loved it.

[narya86]

Wow, awesome comment! ♥

I wanted to try and explain only what was absolutely necessary of their background to get what was going on, and I really hope it was enough.

*lol* Wow I didn't even notice that it started and ended with the door opening and closing. ^^ But yes, the door summed up their situation pretty well. Poor boys. :(

[aboutademongirl]

I was listening to Damien Rice's 9 Crimes and Cheers Darlin' while reading this, and very nearly broke down. Lovely.

[narya86]

Oh now I have to listen to the songs, I don't know them yet. But since they seem to have a good effect in combination with the story... :)

Glad you liked it, thanks a lot for telling me!