OK, the head feels better but I don't think I'm much more coherent ;)
It's not as if this story was lacking sexyness or hotness so far, but them having sex finally made me flail a lot. Also the fact that Fernando still somewhat tries to prevent from getting too close to, to involved with Dan, but at the same time not. And for some reason I still couldn't help but think 'poor Dan' too. Because it feels like although he somehow gets what he wants, he's still hurting. But at least Daniel had been granted this, whatever followed now.
Aawww I hope your headache's completely gone by now! Having one really sucks.
Heh yeah, the sex was relatively unspectacular after all the build up, so, yay that you liked it.
Oh yeah, I'm thinking 'poor Dan' regularly, for various reasons. And you're right, despite it all it's not as if he was really happy right now, and he has his reasons. :/
First of all I have to say, I LOVE the song that inspired Dan playing the piano, there`s some Liverpool video with that song on youtube and it always brings tears to my eyes. It`s just perfect for that moment it really is and it makes this part even better for me!
As for this part: this story is getting better and better with every part. this is so intense, not just the sexual realtionship between Dan and Nando (yay they had sex ^^) but also the emotional side. the fact that Fernando comes to Dan after the incident with the Agurauk shows how intense their realtionship has become and I really like how Dan tries to assure Fernando that it`s not all his fault.
And I really like the part where Dan is showing Nando his house, I think involving that is a great idea, because I tend to forget that Dan isn`t human and is already that old, just like Nando does.
I really love this story so far &hearts and I hope there is no end in sight in the near future ;) I can only repeat myself but I really like the way you two write :)
I'm so glad that we included the link to the song then. &hearts I wasn't sure about it at first, but it was what we pictured and we didn't want to keep it from you guys in case you wanted to know. :)
I'm always so thrilled to hear from you that it always gets better, I always think a chapter might come where you're more "eeehhh". ^^ Well maybe those will still come, but for now I'm really happy. :)
Well yes, it is a big step for Fernando to come to Dan in this state, but let's be completely honest - he doesn't have anyone else.
Ha no, we're only about halfway done. So you'll have plenty more to look forward to. ;)
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This is amazing.
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It's not as if this story was lacking sexyness or hotness so far, but them having sex finally made me flail a lot.
Also the fact that Fernando still somewhat tries to prevent from getting too close to, to involved with Dan, but at the same time not.
And for some reason I still couldn't help but think 'poor Dan' too. Because it feels like although he somehow gets what he wants, he's still hurting. But at least Daniel had been granted this, whatever followed now.
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Heh yeah, the sex was relatively unspectacular after all the build up, so, yay that you liked it.
Oh yeah, I'm thinking 'poor Dan' regularly, for various reasons. And you're right, despite it all it's not as if he was really happy right now, and he has his reasons. :/
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I have enough imagination that this was not unspectacular at all ^^
Ow, don't make me sad!
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As for this part: this story is getting better and better with every part. this is so intense, not just the sexual realtionship between Dan and Nando (yay they had sex ^^) but also the emotional side. the fact that Fernando comes to Dan after the incident with the Agurauk shows how intense their realtionship has become and I really like how Dan tries to assure Fernando that it`s not all his fault.
And I really like the part where Dan is showing Nando his house, I think involving that is a great idea, because I tend to forget that Dan isn`t human and is already that old, just like Nando does.
I really love this story so far &hearts and I hope there is no end in sight in the near future ;) I can only repeat myself but I really like the way you two write :)
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I'm always so thrilled to hear from you that it always gets better, I always think a chapter might come where you're more "eeehhh". ^^ Well maybe those will still come, but for now I'm really happy. :)
Well yes, it is a big step for Fernando to come to Dan in this state, but let's be completely honest - he doesn't have anyone else.
Ha no, we're only about halfway done. So you'll have plenty more to look forward to. ;)
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I'm actually blown away by this chapter. I've got nothing to offer other than wow.
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Thanks for commenting :)
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Oh I'm like that too, guitars and pianos, I don't know why. *sigh*
Dan is definitely struggling right now just as Fernando is, and it will become very clear why I fear...
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