Just Hold Me

Sep 30, 2010 21:27


Title: Just Hold Me
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't know them so these are obviously imaginary counterparts.
Summary: Maybe do what he had wanted to do all his life. Run as far as he could, not looking back, never looking back.
A/N: Inspired by real life and especially for tetila because of her love for the " ( Read more... )

other: fanfic, genre: angst, genre: drama, genre: au, pairing: daniel agger/fernando torres, genre: hurt-comfort, rating: pg-13

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tetila September 30 2010, 19:51:39 UTC
Fernando bit his lip, but in the end it took only a second for him to find what trust was left in him, reach out and entwine their little fingers.

♥ It's just so cute and adorable!

Without ever breaking their locked gaze he held up his little finger and Fernando didn’t even have to look to find and entwine it with his own.

I like how you take the picture from the beginning again. Rundet die Sachen ab :P

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narya86 September 30 2010, 20:06:22 UTC
&hearts I just wanted to have something they kept through childhood and teenage years, some little gesture that was all theirs. And this just sprang to my mind. :) Sooo glad you like it!

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rayziz September 30 2010, 20:07:51 UTC
I like how you take the picture from the beginning again.
yes, I concur this.

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narya86 September 30 2010, 21:52:20 UTC
Thanks a lot! Yeah those belong to my favourite lines in this story too. :)

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rayziz September 30 2010, 20:06:34 UTC
I ♥ this so much. It left a smile on my face, for real.
I was expecting it to be another ficlet cuz i'm used to your fics being shorter(not counting FA and the one with teti), but this was wonderful.Perfect.
You must write more longer stories like this.

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narya86 September 30 2010, 21:53:37 UTC
Haha yeah, I know. The longer the story the more stamina is required so guess and I don't think I always have that. ^^ But I'll try and see where it leads me.
Thanks a lot. &hearts

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vicky86x September 30 2010, 20:18:23 UTC
I really like this one. Friendship is so precious, especially when you have problems with your family :) and I like when someone points it out with a fic :)

I like the idea of young, freckled, smiling Dan with his digger, thats just too sweet. Their whole relationship is so sweet, their little intimate moments. Poor Nando though all the trouble with his family/Dad, he`s lucky to have such a good friend/lover in Dan.

This is something different from all the fics I read recently, but I have to say it`s a nice change :) and I really felt for Nando, there`s nothing worse than having trouble with your family...

Thanks for sharing :)

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narya86 September 30 2010, 21:55:26 UTC
Oh god yes, that image made me melt right on the spot. :D

I really felt sorry for Fernando here all the way through, and he's really lucky to have Dan here. I suppose there are many people out there who need one they don't have.

Really glad you liked the change. :)

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inge_24 September 30 2010, 20:22:37 UTC
so lovely...
liked it very, very much.

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narya86 September 30 2010, 21:55:49 UTC
Yay, thank you! :D

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