The Unknown

Sep 28, 2010 14:26


Title: The Unknown
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't know them so these are obviously imaginary counterparts.
Summary: “Are you afraid?”
A/N: As promised. Second with at least three more to come.

I am falling into grace to the unknown to where you are. )

other: fanfic, genre: angst, pairing: daniel agger/fernando torres, rating: r

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elisa88 September 28 2010, 16:10:03 UTC
The first image is beautifully painted. Fernando lying in bed, vulnerable and breakable (both of them).

And Fernando felt anchored and safe despite leaving his paved path into the wild and unknown
Seriously? I have so much love for that single line.

And I don't know how else to say it, 'cause I feel i'm constantly repeating myself when it comes to your fics, but gosh, this was amazing, and just beautiful.

And I love it! ♥♥♥

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narya86 September 28 2010, 21:00:21 UTC
I really thought there were both absolutely vulnerable in this situation, and that's what I wanted to show. :)

Haha I'm kinda proud of that myself. ^^

Oh, I don't mind repetitions! :D It's definitely better than not getting to hear anything at all. So thanks a lot!

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acrayonsmile September 28 2010, 18:16:31 UTC
This is beautiful <3

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narya86 September 28 2010, 21:10:22 UTC
Thank you. :)

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tetila September 28 2010, 19:34:51 UTC
Ha I loved this one ♥
Made me feel better/warmer after my cold day :)

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narya86 September 28 2010, 21:12:31 UTC
That's so good to hear. &hearts It really served its purpose then. :)

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inge_24 September 28 2010, 20:09:39 UTC
wow! lovely,
liked it very much, especially the last line.

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narya86 September 28 2010, 21:15:35 UTC
Glad to hear, thanks a lot! :)

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eileenyx September 28 2010, 20:55:17 UTC
My goodness. The weight and the awareness/mutual understanding in that "everything", how these two put their fears out in the open, Nando's stutter of a question, and the sureness of Dan's response amid all this uncertainty? Glorious.

And Fernando felt anchored and safe despite leaving his paved path into the wild and unknown. Your use of the word "anchored" is reassuring and romantic. ♥

And your A/N: Fist pump, Jersey Shore style. I'm selfishly happy. Thank you a lot.

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narya86 September 28 2010, 21:24:56 UTC
Oh you just captured the essence of this so perfectly! &hearts I'm so glad I could obviously convey what I wanted to show, thank you so much.

Haha I'm glad I could make you happy with the A/N. ^^

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