The Unknown

[narya86]

Title: The Unknown
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I don't know them so these are obviously imaginary counterparts.
Summary: “Are you afraid?”
A/N: As promised. Second with at least three more to come.

Comments

[chocoholic_81]

this is great!
I like that, here both of them decide consciously to explore the unknown - the danger.
My favourite line is this: "a vulnerability in his eyes that made Fernando’s heart stutter in his chest"

And I can't wait for the next three fics/ficlets from you...

[narya86]

Thank you! :D I always wonder how such a relationship might come to be, and I guess this was one of my possibilities I explored.

Haha they'll come, glad you're looking forward to it! :)

[vicky86x]

This one is so much more than just hot. They both seem so insecure and vulnerable in this situation. Afraid of what will happen afterwards, aware that it might ruin everything. Still they want to be together, I guess you sometimes have to take a risk :)

And the last sentence is just perfection, really! :) looking forward to the ones you post next :)

[narya86]

Thehe yes, while writing this I found that I just can't write pwp. I need plot, background, anything. So this turned into... well, non smut. ^^ And yes, sometimes it's definitely worth to take it too.

Really glad you like it and you're looking forward to the next, thank you!! :)

[jeri_lyn]

so lovely! They do something to me - they're just perfect together, no? I love how you've captured this very human moment - the need that they have for each other, the apprehension and insecurities that go along with opening themselves up. This was the line that got me, too: "a vulnerability in his eyes that made Fernando’s heart stutter in his chest." I enjoy your writing so much! Thanks!

[narya86]

Yes they really are. :) And I guess it's the most human thing in their place to be afraid and insecure, right?

Thanks for telling me that you enjoyed it so much. :)

[narya86]

It really is a mess, their situation, right? But there definitely is some connection, even if I don't know of what kind. ;)

I'm really glad you like it. &hearts

[marie16fh]

Lovely, Fernando stepping out in the unknown for Dan.

Great, can't wait for more :-) x

[narya86]

I guess they're both stepping into the unknown for one another. :)

Thank you!!