Comments | narrow_my_bed: An old piece of writing

narrow_my_bed

An old piece of writing

Mar 18, 2009 16:52

Fandom: Tsubasa
Characters: Mokona-centric, mentions of everyone in the travelling group.
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff, gen, introspective, slight angst.
Warnings: None.
Summary: Fay is touchy-feely and with little respect for personal space, but he's not very good at cuddling.

( Fay isn't as good as the others when it comes to cuddling. )

mokona, my brother thinks i'm a pervert, writing, fay, clamp, i say he's the perverted one, fanfiction, begone writer's block, do not think impure thoughts, tsubasa

Comments 16

theotherdenise March 18 2009, 16:27:17 UTC

Cute and I like the descriptions of everyone's hugs. The last line is so sad. *Wants to hug a Mokona*

narrow_my_bed March 18 2009, 16:28:42 UTC

I'm very happy you liked it. Thank you for commenting! *also wants to hug Mokona*

ellethill March 18 2009, 16:39:06 UTC

This is a brilliant take on the Mokona-sleeps-beside-everyone plot point, and HUGE props for thinking about it, and for writing Mokona fic which we so very sorely lack. I'm looking at it and can't stop thinking how right it all is, from the pov of all the characters (and Fai especially, obviously ^^)

Good job!

narrow_my_bed March 18 2009, 16:42:21 UTC

I'm blushing a little over here, just to let you know. Thank you so much for taking the time to say that! Yes, I've been meaning to write something Mokona-centric for ages, because she's so darling and deserves so much more love than fandom gives her.

jlarinda March 18 2009, 17:47:41 UTC

asdjfl;sd The last bit ;o; bawww Mokona

*sucks at reviews* Seconding what ellethill said 8|b

narrow_my_bed March 18 2009, 17:48:58 UTC

That's quite alright; I'm just happy you took the time to review at all. I'm glad you liked it!

herm_nefer March 18 2009, 17:56:52 UTC

I loved the sweetness in this fic and it made me remember that Mokona is a very sweet girl who loves all her companions very much. I see this as a very well written fic that is extraordinarily well placed in character. Now I"m thinking about writing about the miss-adventures of Kurogane and Mokona, because You know she loves teasing him but cares about him a lot to.

very good job, I want to go find a mokona and snuggle her.

narrow_my_bed March 18 2009, 17:59:51 UTC

Thank you for reading and telling me that. I'm so glad you liked it, and I highly encourage writing about Mokona and Kurogane!

captainsarah March 18 2009, 21:05:32 UTC

omg I love this, despite it making me wibble. I love Mokona SO MUCH and how she cares for everyone and tries to make them feel better is conveyed so well in this. &hearts

narrow_my_bed March 18 2009, 21:07:39 UTC

I'm very glad you liked it. There just isn't enough Mokona fic in fandom, sadly. Thank you for your comment!