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[nappo_chan]

Comments

[eclats_de_voix]

I liked this. It was very smooth to read through, with a lot of poetic sensory details. Very spiritual and mystical. I like your writing ;] The 'and it's gone' was powerful, I found, in the way you used it. Because what the soul is, what keeps us alive, that will power, is such a mystery, and the vague 'it' just meshes well. Good job!

[nappo_chan]

T-thank you so much! Q-Q *bows*
Wow, I'm glad to know "it's gone" got that way to you.

I feel that way, too - your whole comment made me think about a song I don't hear since a loong while ago, where near the end the lyrics are "Welcome / So close to the pale skin / I'm there / But one touch it's gone". It moved me a lot the first time I heard it - and it still does, somehow, when I listen to it... I guess it's kinda powerful, huh.
As I said it's been a long while since I last heard it, so I don't think it was the inspiration for that... but maybe it has some part in it? xD

Anyways, thanks again!

[kirishimaayama]

;A;
Sounds like character death there and yet, not. A lot of strong, emotive imagery.

[nappo_chan]

Now it's time I hide *runs away embarrassed*

o(≧A≦)o
It was something like that I wanted =w= Glad to know it moved you somehow!
>_>llll

[kirishimaayama]

*catches you before you get too far away* Where are you going? >3

:D

?

[nappo_chan]

NUUUUU....
*Her voice echoes far onto the distance*

:DD

[mintylotus]

...you know, I think I'll stalk you now.

[nappo_chan]

LOL, NOT ANOTHER ONE
Just kidding (:

Well, I consider the whole stalk thingie a compliment, so thanks a lot :D

[mintylotus]

Ahaha, I try :D <3

[nappo_chan]

Don't worry, don't worry, you did it 8DD