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nancybrown

DW Fic: Intermezzo

Jun 14, 2011 21:32

Title: Intermezzo
Author: nancybrown
Characters: River, Nine, Jenny
Rating: PG
Words: 700
Summary: He can't meet her yet.
AN: Sequel to Partners. Written for spoiler_song's Guns N' Curls Ficathon for myconstant's prompt: River/Nine, I was a heavy heart to carry
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intersections, ficathon, doctor who, river song, jenny_dw

Comments 21

cinderbella333 June 17 2011, 05:46:41 UTC

OMG, I love this to infinity! You did a magnificent job with an extremely challenging prompt! I love Nine. I love River. And I love Jenny. But getting them all in one story? I thought it was impossible. Yet you carried it off beautifully. They all sounded like themselves. They all interacted in realistic ways. And this was the perfect length. A gorgeous little snapshot if timey-wimeyness.

nancybrown June 22 2011, 02:00:28 UTC

Thanks! I admit, I had help from already writing the River+Jenny team-up. Can you imagine if River and Jenny *had* run into Jack and Rose?

cinderbella333 June 29 2011, 15:02:16 UTC

Oh dear god. If you ever write that, I want to read it!

dil_deal June 19 2011, 19:06:11 UTC

'This one is in black, mourning colours for the lives he's so recently destroyed. She aches for the raw pain she can read, now that she knows, arcing under his skin like electrical jolts, contorting his face into a mad grin.'
I love that description of Nine. CE radiated that ache I think. There was always a bit of storm hiding behind his eyes. I miss Nine so much.
I hoped River could take a peek at young Jack. :)A sight to behold!
I just ache for all of them. *sigh*

nancybrown June 22 2011, 01:59:34 UTC

I miss Nine, too. He gave off the right level of despair at what had happened, I thought, and I really would love to see what would happen should he ever run into River. :)

abluestocking June 25 2011, 01:28:46 UTC

Ahhhhh, I was just thinking that I needed River and Nine together, and here they are! So much love.

"Oh, I've got two of them running around. She's about this tall," he holds his hand around the level of his neck, "and she'll be making friends with whatever's the most dangerous thing in the vicinity. He's this tall," the hand moves up, "and is mostly likely being chased by someone's furious husband or wife or both."

Annnnd this is where I lost it and started beaming at everything in the vicinity. xD

nancybrown June 25 2011, 14:27:28 UTC

I would love to see the adventures of River and Nine, but I'm not up to writing a full AU just now.

*glee* Figuring out how to describe those two without naming them directly made me SO HAPPY, you have no idea.

honeynoir June 26 2011, 21:14:10 UTC

So fab! I love how River is so aware of everything. Your Nine is wonderful. And Jenny!

nancybrown September 30 2011, 23:46:17 UTC

Thanks! (Sorry for the late reply!)