The whole initial run of the Love Song could stand serious expansion-and-tweaking; if nothing else, I really need to find out this kid's name. I mean, I know he's young, and is one of Aifiric's Hands--instead of coordinating through Iarlaith or working mostly for Iarlaith, the way Alaia does--and works almost exclusively in foreign areas. My inclination is that he's not native, at that, based on his lack of familiarity with the old colour associations.
*snerk* I think his forlorn hope that one of the Princes would have been easier goes a ways towards implying that he really doesn't know them terribly well yet. :)
I'm glad Arianhrod's politeness comes through, even with this fairly rough.
And I don't know. If she does, she hasn't said so, but at the same time she hasn't said she doesn't either.
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*snerk* I think his forlorn hope that one of the Princes would have been easier goes a ways towards implying that he really doesn't know them terribly well yet. :)
I'm glad Arianhrod's politeness comes through, even with this fairly rough.
And I don't know. If she does, she hasn't said so, but at the same time she hasn't said she doesn't either.
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