FANFICTION CORNER: MISSING

[nadesico_chan]

I step off the train
I'm walkin' down your street again
And past your door
But you don't live there anymore

The wind that welcomed me at the train station this morning has been so cold, but so familiar. Walking in the town where you used to live is kind of reassuring. As I recognize my surroundings, it

Comments

[danceinthedark]

I know this song! o_o -is genuinely surprised by this-

But whoa~ I like this opening. It feels so... melancholic. Like nothing can be right again. You captured that sense so so well~ Don't you make me like SungMin woman T_T Don't do it~

I say continue, even if there is the risk that it may make me more attached to SungMin >> (Well, how you write him anyways)

And of course slipping in ShiHan or Shiteuk would be awesome 8D XD; Okay, I'm totally kidding ^^; Just trying to shake off the sadness: I that's a sign of really effective writing, when you can really make the reader feel something, and for me, you've definitely done that :

[nadesico_chan]

Wow, I'm falling in love more and more with you woman^____^
No really, thank you for the amazing review, you have no idea how happy and fulfilled it makes me feel. I intented this piece to be intense and sad, and I'm very glad you felt what I wanted to convey: the sadness, the longing, the pain... And you knew the song too!And that was an old one, 92 or 94 I think.
Yeah, I can't believe I've made a Sungmin fic , but I'm glad you love THAT Sungmin lol, mine is rather OCC. I didn't want to make you sad, but the sadist part of me is rather satisfied with it^^
So you think I should go on? I certainly will if I'm encouraged enough^^
Thank you so much again *hugs*

[danceinthedark]

I love you too ^3^ <3

You're welcome, good fics always make me write a little bit more ^^; I was so surprised, cause usually I don't know song fic songs, but I did here, and I wa slike !_! I know that! XD

Meh, characters are how you take them, and that's SungMin as you see him. Which is far more stomachable to me than most SungMin portrayals XD;

I do think you should go on ^^ -cuddles- Definitely~~

We also must brainstorm together for the continuiation of my SD fic o.o I keep forgetting about that and it makes me feel like a horrible person XD;

[nadesico_chan]

Lol I'm tempted to ask you to become my wifey, but I know you're already taken^^ Thanks for the praise, it's nice seeing good reactions towards my writing, I'm always glad when it reaches people, but of course you know what I mean^___^
I'm happy you like my interpretation of Sungmin. I hope I'll be able to give him some depths in the future, as I intend to do with Shindong too^^
And yes, I can't wait to work with you on that Shindong fic!It's because you wrote that story that I started to consider he was maybe an interesting material for fic, and don't worry, you are not horrible, just horribly busy, just like me I suppose^___^
Again, thanks for your support, hope I'll read you too, you know how much I love your writings.

[nadesico_chan]

I suppose all those questions are to be answered in the story I'll write later if you want me too^^
The questions are: did you like this story/prologue, and if yes, do you want to read the whole story?
Sorry, I don't want to torture you with the suspense or anything, but as I intend the plot to be highly angsty, I want to be sure that the style of the prologue is appreciated enough for me to write it^^
Anyway, thanks for commenting!!

[nadesico_chan]

Thank you so much for commenting, and glad you liked. I'm really happy that my piece touched you somehow^____^
I feel encouraged to unfold the drama then^^

[nadesico_chan]

You're adorable, thank you again*hugs*

[eleawin]

je devais te laisser un commentaire hier mais ha ha, pas de net parce que les serveurs de mon campus sont pourris ^^;
Bref, c'est un joli bout de texte, triste et mélancolique. Le seul reproche qu'on pourrait faire c'est qu'on n'a vraiment peu de détails sur ce qu'il s'est passé et c'est vraiment frustrant xD Et c'est plein, plein de angst +_+
Il m'a fallut un bout de temps pour piger que c'était un POV de Sungmin parce que je ne savais pas que Donghee, c'est Shindong XD; *pas experte en suju*
Sinon, ben une autre pièce pour comprendre ce qu'il y a eu ne serait pas de refus ^^