Breakeven (4/?)

[naddypants]

TITLE: Breakeven
AUTHOR: naddypants
RATING: 15
CHARACTERS: Ianto and Jack. Don't worry they'll get together in the end!
SUMMARY: With Lisa gone and Ianto left alone with a baby in a cold hospital, his life feels like its about to end. But will it? 
WARNINGS: Completely and utterly AU. Turn back now if you don't like AU...Also, it's a bit sad in places.
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Comments

[rambleinblue]

WOW! Seriously this is almost like looking at a painting. Everything is so descriptive, so emotional, so colorful and thought provoking. I can't even find the words to describe my anxiously waiting heart that will try to remain patient for the next installment.

[naddypants]

First off...that icon is doing funny things to my brain. *twitches*

Haha seriously? Woah. I'm not quite sure what to say. I mean obviously that's what I was going for, but to think I achieved it means a lot to me! :)
And oops. I feel bad now! Exams mean it may take slightly longer to write than the previous instalments!

[frakkin_addict]

Wonderful chapter! I adored how Jack was there for Ianto during the hours of agonizing waiting while his daughter was in danger. Great job capturing the emotion of the moment and the subtle chemistry developing between the two men. Great job!

[naddypants]

Why thank you dear! :) And yep. Couldn't leave Jack out, could I? I'm glad I got the emotion across, and the tiny hint of them liking each other, even though it is purely platonic at the minute. :)

Thank you again!

[hab318princess]

wonderful update, the turmoil when it goes wrong! keep going

[naddypants]

I'm super glad you think so! I feel bad for putting him through so much, but I'm glad you think it's good and that I should write more. Means a lot :D

[naddypants]

Awwww *huggles* Well, there were doctors. And as I was writing it I just made up some random doctor and then *headdesked* when I remembered Owen. :P So that's how that happened.

:( I know I know. Then again, it's Jack and Ianto, nothing can go too smoothly for too long eh? Weee *blushing* I'm so glad the description was good! And I'm glad that came across.
Oooh LOL! Jack might get jealous. :P Secretly I think he has a crush on Ianto. Even though he's not meant to yet.

And you liked Jack? YAY :D Hahaa the caught with the trousers down story shall have to become more literal methinks! And well, I think Jack gets given too much of a tough guy rep sometimes. He's perfectly sensitive in my opinion! :)

Oooh I do hope so myself. And well, as you said, with Owen in charge, what could possibly go wrong? Although those are often famous last words...

Thank you so much sweetie! :D I shall do my best to wade through the biology and chemistry and get some out at the weekend. :)

Mega hugs for you for the awesome comment!
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[elanor12]

WOW!
really. this is brillantly fantastic. The emotions are greatly describe...
This is very well done.

[naddypants]

Woah!
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you think that! :)
Uhm...yeah. Thank you! :D :D
*is very happy*