April Wings (And Dreams of Things) [ 2 of 2 ]

[nachtegael]

Title: April Wings (And Dreams of Things)
Pairing: Jongin//Taemin
Rating: PG-13
Warnings:[Spoiler (click to open)]language, slight teenage angst, one-sided Soojung/Jongin, mention of dance related injuries, brief mention of Jongdae/Seulgi

Disclaimer:  I don't own anything, written just for fun.
Summary: Jongin is four and a half when he meets the two greatest loves of his

Comments

[zyxisagod]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh reeeeeeeeeeen i'm so sorry for being so so late but yes i am heeeeeeeeereee!!

[nachtegael]

omg wow....! I get a comment, and it has gifs, no less! wow....! <3

seriously though, why are you sorry! you didn't have to comment at all, much less leave me this long and amazing one <33 yes, I'm so relieved and happy my recip liked it and everything fell into place ;u; could NOT have done it without your help, so thank you thank you once again!

[linnhe]

Jongin curses into his pillow, a bad word he's never said aloud but has heard Taemin use on occasion. He's been saving it inside himself for an opportunity that really deserves it. A situation like this.
jongin is such a sweetheart, i want to steal him away from his situation and tell him to pursue all his dreams. parents crushing their childrens' spirits with expectations are gross

Even inside his gloves his fingers are cold, but Jongin doesn’t shove them in his coat pockets. He doesn’t want to disturb the bus ticket carefully flattened against the lining of his jacket.
this is so gentle and sweet. like jongin

“Hmph.” Her huff is hot against his throat as she leans into his chest to steal the bottle away from his lips. “Glad to know what I’m valued for. And good luck, because you’ll need it. You suck.”soojung in this *-* she was so biting, but in a charming way, and i could tell from the start she was experiencing her own first love with either taemin or jongin or both, but jongin was so busy with taemin and taemin with himself

[nachtegael]

wow, thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a thoughtful comment! I think they're all sweethearts, even if Soojung is a prickly one. that's totally true, Jongin was so focused on his dreams and on Taemin (and he needed to be) that he was oblivious to some important things. and maybe Soojung was selfish for pushing her needs into his frame of consciousness, but feeling out your limits and boundaries when everything feels so desperate at that age is part of growing up

[kimkai]

This was so good! I love Taemin and Jongin's relationship, how even as they grew apart they were always connected. It was really sweet. Soonung was a great friend to Jongin, and I really like how all the side characters filled out the story.

[nachtegael]

Taekai just keep growing on me <3 (I'm trying to write soulmates au now)
hehe, Soojung was the best//worst friend Jongin could ever need
thanks so much for reading! :)

[anonymous]

ahh oh my god i went through so many emotions when reading this.. honestly my soul was so hurt through most of the fic just bc i couldn't tell if they were going to be together or not and i just felt so so bad for jongin. i was like praying he wouldn't move on and forget taem or taem would forget him ;__; but finally getting to the end was so satisfying and i was just so relieved. omg sorry if this doesn't make much sense! it's pretty hard to get my feelings into words but i loved this so so much!!

[nachtegael]

no no, that makes perfect sense! and I felt much the same while writing it though I had the ending in mind. *hugs* I hope it didn't hurt too much ^^;; thank you so much for reafing and leaving your thoughts!