Ryman Legacy Chapter 16B

Dec 25, 2013 20:31

The whole chapter from start to finish

The final part only, for those who have read the prior parts already.

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katrisims December 27 2013, 17:04:45 UTC
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Yikes, that sneak attack turned out to be not-that-well-planned! Now Hideki has his most dangerous opponents captured... *worried*

Of course, since they were kind of public about what they were going to do, maybe now *someone* would realize and do something... Their families at least will be wondering where they are. On that note, I wonder what Timmy will do once he realizes Edwin hasn't come back...

It must be terrible sitting there, realizing it all is true, that Hideki really is doing all those horrible things, and you're caught... *shudder* A good question from from Brawly, really: what *is* Hideki going to win on this exactly?

No, Brawly, nooooo! Hideki, you monster. He truly is a terrifying villain. Also, that is an excellent, horrifying picture of Brawly being eaten. Poor, poor Brawly.

I keep thinking and thinking about Rodney's plot. It was a clever one, probably the best one he could have. I can't say I approve of handing Briney over to Hideki of all people, that's a terrible thing to do to poor Briney. Hideki gets
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mzyra December 27 2013, 18:00:20 UTC
KATRI YOU SAVED ME FROM THE SILENCE *CLINGS*

[Spoiler (click to open)]Well, the boys could have been a trifle more planned, but the problem was how prepared Hideki was, which they didn't anticipate. The happiest outcome would have been them managing to escape, since that was all they were going to manage without, like, guns or something.

Yeah, only the people in pretty serious denial are going to be able to avoid acknowledging that something is DEFINITELY up now. Especially since Hideki (and, to a lesser extent, Simon) is getting tired of pretending otherwise.

I'm sure Hideki will do villain-monologue-ing sooner or later, he is very much the type at this point :P Most likely to Huey, since Huey tends to ask questions and is a know-it-all.

I had to save before that cowplant-eating-Brawly shot and quit and re-enter the lot at least once, because it is like a split second before the sim vanishes. Poor Brawly >.To be honest, Rodney had almost forgotten about Briney with all his trauma, but if he could have a get-out-of-jail-free card for his family, he'd sure
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lauriempress December 27 2013, 19:51:18 UTC
Okay, finished it last night! Bad Hideki! Bad bad bad Hideki! *sigh* I might as well, quit, it probably just strokes his ego. I'll try to stroke yours a bit instead. Bloody brilliant! (Every pun intended there by the by.) The cowplant shots were excellent! And the picture of the body too! The shit will be going down soon, I'm guessing. I can hardly wait to see Huey's kids reacting to all this. And I might be weaving this section into my Myshuno prompt. :D

LOVED IT!

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mzyra December 27 2013, 20:55:58 UTC
Oooh, I am curious how you'd work this into that prompt *ponders*

*Hideki frowns at 'bad', crosses it out and replaces with 'evil' and 'monstrous', smiles with satisfaction*

Thaaaaaaaank yooooooooooooou <3 <3 <3

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amylu1988 December 31 2013, 16:09:12 UTC
Sorry Jess, I was away over Christmas and I missed this!

[Spoiler (click to open)]Wow, so much stuff in one chapter part!!

So much to omg at, but then Seth yelling to Rodney and running to hug him was so cute it pretty much erased all the upset and grr-argh-omg.

But still, Hideki is scary. Hideki with Briney's endless supply of elixir is bloody terrifying! Poor Dwayne, poor Rodney, and ohhh dear Huey, Elliot and Edwin! :( Omg and Madison...just...Madison.

At least the rest of the Liv branch made it to Heaven? I kept reminding myself that that's where Eddie is meant to be. :D

And can I just squeee one more time at Afterlife Sethney being in the main story now? Woooo! :D

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mzyra January 5 2014, 21:28:12 UTC
I hope you had a nice holiday ^.^
[Spoiler (click to open)] Actually Seth didn't expect to hug Rodney, so much as stand excitedly slightly inside his personal space and beam at him - it was Rodney who took him by surprise and hugged him :P

Hideki -.- And yeah, definitely sucks to be Madison.

Eddie is totes meeting you about now :P

This is a good point - would you rather I kept them visibly in the main story? I was thinking of just doing them as writing without staging, but I might be able to keep them in with staging and everything if people want.


Thank you for reading and commenting! <3

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biglenny January 2 2014, 09:51:11 UTC
Wow! Just wow!

[Spoiler (click to open)]Hideki is a total monster! The way he killed Brawly and Madison shows how much of a psycho he really is. He’s no doubt the kind of person I would love to punch in the face repeatedly for all the things he did... )

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mzyra January 5 2014, 21:36:05 UTC
First things first: there's basically no such thing as too long a comment :P
[Spoiler (click to open)] Hideki would probably taunt you as you did that :/

Ahhhh, but that is why you SHOULD expect Brawly to die - Hideki can have far more fun with the people of whom he has relatives or friends, and he can do much, much worse to Elliot than killing him. Brawly didn't mean so much to him and he didn't have as much to do with him, but his death could be used to get to his friends. But you're right in figuring out people's connections :)

Yeah, Hideki doesn't really care for anyone but Hideki, so Madison was always somewhat expendable :/

*Pets Rodney* He'll be safer and happier now :/ Though Madison probably won't thank him regardless - not now she'll know about what happened to her father Winston...


Thank you for reading and your lovely long comment :P

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scribal_goddess January 4 2014, 21:32:45 UTC
Goddamn it, Jess!

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mzyra January 5 2014, 21:36:38 UTC
*Bounces over to boolprop*

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