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We found your suggestions for power limitations make sense and would most definitely be acceptable without alternation. We also loved the tl;dr so there's really no need to panic about length at all :)
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Your app overall is good, but we would like it if you could submit a revision of your third person sample.
Currently, your third person sample relies on dialogue with another (non-player) character. What we need to see is George’s reactions and inner workings as either a piece of stand-alone introspective writing of him, or as if George were interacting (or about to interact with) another character of another player. Basically, just something that shows a roleplay-style format of character interactions.
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OU | Howard Link | Reservedhawkeyed_crowMay 24 2011, 22:39:11 UTC
PLAYER Name: Cal (Calenlass Greenleaf) Personal Journal: calen_greenleaf Age: 18+ Contact: email - the.crow.who.stalks @ gmail . com Plurk - www . plurk . com / Calenlass Other Characters Played: N/A Link to last AC: N/A
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AbilitiesAs far as magical learning goes, the short answer is yes, Ada will certainly have opportunities for it and be able to put it into practice! She probably won't be able to gain access to the rare books in the Miskatonic library until she's proved that she's trustworthy though
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It all sounds good to me~ I doubt Vincent can actually put someone to sleep for an infinite amount of time, and he generally doesn't go with several hours if he doesn't need it. But I'd be good with putting a 12 hour limit, and that more powerful creatures are immune.
As for the seal... I think it's generally kind of always moving, but slowly. Using the Chain speeds up the progress, though it's not limited to the amount of times but rather what matters is how much and how long. It's a canon limitation and Vincent won't use it if absolutely necessary for this reason since being dragged into the Abyss goes against what he wants. A limitation on how many times he can use it would be good for me, although I highly doubt he'll actually use them all up because it really takes a lot for him to feel it's a necessary move.
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As far as putting an exact number to the possible uses of the Chain, we're cool with leaving it as-is--more organic and implicit. So long as he knows in the abstract that there are consequences to the Chain's use, we think that's fine!
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We found your suggestions for power limitations make sense and would most definitely be acceptable without alternation. We also loved the tl;dr so there's really no need to panic about length at all :)
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Currently, your third person sample relies on dialogue with another (non-player) character. What we need to see is George’s reactions and inner workings as either a piece of stand-alone introspective writing of him, or as if George were interacting (or about to interact with) another character of another player. Basically, just something that shows a roleplay-style format of character interactions.
Let us know if you’d like us clarify further, and we look forward to reading your revision.
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Name: Cal (Calenlass Greenleaf)
Personal Journal: calen_greenleaf
Age: 18+
Contact: email - the.crow.who.stalks @ gmail . com Plurk - www . plurk . com / Calenlass
Other Characters Played: N/A
Link to last AC: N/A
CHARACTER
Name: Howard Link
Fandom: D.Gray-man
Age: 20
OU or AU?: OU.
Timeline: post-205
Wiki link: Warning; this wikia is rather…/cough
Rest linked to journal.
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And no prob about contacting me to work it out.
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AbilitiesAs far as magical learning goes, the short answer is yes, Ada will certainly have opportunities for it and be able to put it into practice! She probably won't be able to gain access to the rare books in the Miskatonic library until she's proved that she's trustworthy though ( ... )
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*runs off to do thiiiings*
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As for the seal... I think it's generally kind of always moving, but slowly. Using the Chain speeds up the progress, though it's not limited to the amount of times but rather what matters is how much and how long. It's a canon limitation and Vincent won't use it if absolutely necessary for this reason since being dragged into the Abyss goes against what he wants. A limitation on how many times he can use it would be good for me, although I highly doubt he'll actually use them all up because it really takes a lot for him to feel it's a necessary move.
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Please feel free to say hello on the OOC comm. We'll have an intro log up in the next couple of hours which will have all the in-character information you need to get started.
As far as putting an exact number to the possible uses of the Chain, we're cool with leaving it as-is--more organic and implicit. So long as he knows in the abstract that there are consequences to the Chain's use, we think that's fine!
Congratulations and welcome to Mysterium Tremendum!
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