APH: Painting Smoke -Part 1/2 ((Japan, GermanyxN.Italy))

[mylittlepuppet]

((I felt like writing but was too brain-dead to think of any ideas, so I checked out a prompt-generator online. It told me to....

Write a story in which these three objects appear and are important:
"A campfire, a damp towel, and a Japanese print."

Hence, a fic about the Axis Powers! ))

Painting Smoke

Something deep inside the fire popped, and an angry

Comments

[pickingupstars]

Aww, for some reason Germany's POV is really cute, with his determination and worrying.

Tehehe, there needs to be more fics with both groups stranded on that island. Camping is funny enough in real life! Oh the stories that could be made...

Oh, and in this line: Waking Italy now would surely cause a raucus that would leave them all exhausted in the morning.
"Raucus" should probably be "ruckus."

[mylittlepuppet]

thanks! :D
indeed! though I've never been camping outside of my backyard (other than in a small cabin) but I definitely want to go for real!
Gracias! You are quite right! Apparently "raucous" is an adjective. Interestinggggg... :D

[pickingupstars]

I have been tent camping with the families of my brother's hockey team, but my Mom does not take it well. I have also gone tent camping once with girl scouts and 'cabin camping' about a million times. I love cooking over a fire. There is an obvious them to me: I like food and feeding people.

Tehehe, I would go with you. I'd also go with Hilz but times she has invited me in the past, I already had things planned.

Raucous is also of Latin while ruckus is an Americanism XD Linguistics is fun. I am such a geek.