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Fic: Pounding Heart

Jan 06, 2010 12:44

Title: Pounding Heart
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Gabriel/Mohinder
Rating: PG-13
Summary: His heart would beat so loudly that it was all he could hear. (Sequel to " Sweaty Palms" and " Dry Mouth")
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Slash, AU, Humor, Drama

( He was foolish for even entertaining the idea. )

character: gabriel, rating: pg-13, happy ending, genre: au, character: virginia, fic

Comments 19

random_muppet January 7 2010, 15:50:59 UTC

Very good as always.

I love that Gabriel has gained in confidence since the relationship started, enough to stand up to his mother and make the first move in proposing to Mohinder. It's nice to see him come out of his shell and stand up for what he want's.

starrdust411 January 7 2010, 16:18:59 UTC

I'm glad that you saw Gabriel's growth. I was sort of afraid that it didn't really come off very clearly that he was changing (for the better) thanks to Mohinder.

ssrobajo January 8 2010, 14:23:51 UTC

Aw, cuteness :D

starrdust411 January 8 2010, 16:31:34 UTC

Thank you :D

l0ve_in_300ks February 6 2010, 09:17:35 UTC

I can't begin to tell you how much I adore this story. It has everything I love about Gabriel Gray. I always imagined him crying after sex haha, but I have never seen anyone write it. Best. I really enjoyed the sweetness of this, it's so rare with this pairing.

aislinamara February 22 2010, 21:32:20 UTC

Awwweee!!!! That is just so...so...so cute! And sweet! And wonderful! I'm grinning like a loon at the moment, and people are starting to look at me funny. Thanks for sharing!

dancingdragon3 August 27 2010, 01:46:24 UTC

Awwww! That was thoroughly enjoyable. Absolutely loved it! And the sex was so... I don't even know what the word is. That's how much it was. Cheers!