Story/Fanfic - 'A Serenade for Romano'

[mykonos2]

Character(s): Spain, France, Prussia (aka The Bad Touch Trio), S.Italy, N.Italy (using only human names in story)
Pairing:  Spamano
Rating: 13+
Warnings: kissing, swearing, alcohol, AU
Summary:  Our dear Bad Touch Trio gets drunk and, before anyone sees it coming, Prussia suggests Spain to go and sing a serenade for Romano. In the middle of

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[monochrome_rock]

No matter what you write, I just can't keep from falling in love with it. <3

You, my dear, are simply awesome.

[mykonos2]

Waaaah! Thank you... you make me blush <3

[kaiya_tan]

*bubbles with joy*

EEeeeeeeeee!!! *wiggles* Izwassooocuutteeee~! >w< It was....just so *sweet* and adorable and and and and I love Spamano :D You make good Spamano, VERY good Spamano so I love YOU for that as well~! *huggles* This is SO going in my memories....

[mykonos2]

<3<3<3

Thanks you for all the love! :D Am a big fan of Spamano as well <3

[xenpher]

Wah!!! That was cute X33333

Especially how Antonio kept on singing after being drenched!!!
That made my day!! (though the serenade itself is a little awkward to me)

Hey, ummm, was i taught wrong? I was taught that it was vas-y when saying to one person, and allez-vous for formal or group.....(sorry about the grammar....it gets to me if i've been taught to say the wrong thing from the start)

[mykonos2]

I'm glad I provoked such a reaction :D

Really? I didn't know that- I don't speak French so...hehehe *embarrassed*... Well should I correct that? I mean, Francis was actually referring to Antonio only...

[xenpher]

I'm not sure... since Antonio is a long term friend, i'd assume Francis would use the less formal Vas-y. I have never heard of Allez-y (only allez-vous), but assuming its correct, i'd think it's formal...

[aoinu99]

I think both vas-y and allez-y are applicable. Vas-y is more casual than allez-y.

In your case,
“Go, go! Allez-y !” (12) Francis urged in a hushed tone
--> since Francis is kind of urging Antonio to go, I think vas-y is more suitable. Allez-y is less pushy than vas-y. It means more or less like 'go ahead'. For example if Antonio asks whether he could go or not, and Francis allows, most probably he would say Allez-y.

arghh, my French is not so good and I'm not very good in explaining, either. Hope that can help though.

[aoinu99]

hoooooooooooooooooooo my godddddddddd...

to be honest, I fell in love with the song now! ahahaha. I cant imagine if I have Spain serenading me. I might die~~

ah yes, and the 'que' for the French part, isnt it better if you say 'quoi'? just in my opinion though..

anyway, I really really enjoy this story! you dont know how much you've made my day!

[mykonos2]

Thanks for commenting <3

Ah, sorry, I don't speak French- thank you for the suggestion, I'll correct that right away!

[sweetfragrance9]

Oh my God! I so love the harana~ *shot*

Good job! :D

[mykonos2]

srry -harana?

Thanks! :D

[sweetfragrance9]

Uhmmm the thing Spain is doing..

embarrassed

[mykonos2]

ahhh, I see, hehehe... excuse me my stupidity...