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myanoel10

The New Beginning-Chapter 6

May 16, 2010 16:49

Another chapter of The New Beginning is up. I am not sure I am entirely happy with this chapter but here it is anyway. Please leave me a comment and telling me what you think!

( Chapter Six... )

the new beginning, summer's story, tnb

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roxmorgirl May 16 2010, 21:19:32 UTC

First comment! I think... Haha... What I don't get is why people care so much... Yay me...
Anyway! This was a great chapter!! It was really interesting! Poor Summer, she thought she'd get to see her baby again... :'( That's so sad! And Nathan is really creepy... I hope Summer, Jake, and Jason can teach that jerk a lesson! And I hope Summer's able to pick between them, because she seems to love both of them and that must be hard :( Great job! You do a good job of showing the characters' emotions :)

myanoel10 May 17 2010, 02:23:17 UTC

Thanks so much for commenting! It's difficult to write with her liking both guys. I think I might write the next chapter as Jake or Jason. I'm not sure though, I just thought that it might make the chapters a little more interesting.

roxmorgirl May 17 2010, 02:53:15 UTC

Ooh, that would be interesting!! I'd like it however you decide to do it :)

myanoel10 May 17 2010, 03:34:30 UTC

I think it would give the story a new feel, I even thought about adding more people into the story but I'm not sure about that either. What do you think?

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the_wilsons May 17 2010, 02:36:47 UTC

Great chapter! It made me a little sad though! I want to know what happens with Nathan! This is crazy! Crazy good!

myanoel10 May 17 2010, 03:32:53 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it, I wasn't sure I wanted Nathan to come back into her life so soon but it just came out so, he's back.

the_wilsons May 17 2010, 23:19:38 UTC

Well it is very good! I can't wait to read more!

alexavo_thesims May 17 2010, 06:39:36 UTC

Interesting chapter! Poor Summer... Everywhere she goes Nathan is there :( Anyway, great update! Keep it up! :D

myanoel10 May 17 2010, 15:21:22 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure I wanted Nathan to come back so quickly but when I write I write whatever comes to my mind at the time and it just slipped out so, he's here. :)

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myanoel10 May 17 2010, 15:19:23 UTC

Soon I hope. I finished take all the pictures yesterday so I should have it out today, it will be a really long chapter because it will have updates on last three of the children.

bcintron32 May 17 2010, 20:06:41 UTC

Awww... I can feel Summer's pain! =(

myanoel10 May 17 2010, 20:44:04 UTC

She has had a difficult life but it will probably get better soon. Thanks for commenting! :)