The New Beginning-Chapter 6

[myanoel10]

Another chapter of The New Beginning is up. I am not sure I am entirely happy with this chapter but here it is anyway. Please leave me a comment and telling me what you think!

Comments

[roxmorgirl]

First comment! I think... Haha... What I don't get is why people care so much... Yay me...
Anyway! This was a great chapter!! It was really interesting! Poor Summer, she thought she'd get to see her baby again... :'( That's so sad! And Nathan is really creepy... I hope Summer, Jake, and Jason can teach that jerk a lesson! And I hope Summer's able to pick between them, because she seems to love both of them and that must be hard :( Great job! You do a good job of showing the characters' emotions :)

[myanoel10]

Thanks so much for commenting! It's difficult to write with her liking both guys. I think I might write the next chapter as Jake or Jason. I'm not sure though, I just thought that it might make the chapters a little more interesting.

[roxmorgirl]

Ooh, that would be interesting!! I'd like it however you decide to do it :)

[myanoel10]

I think it would give the story a new feel, I even thought about adding more people into the story but I'm not sure about that either. What do you think?

[roxmorgirl]

As for switching viewpoints, I think that'd make it interesting to see how the other characters are feeling as well as Summer.
Adding new people... Hmm... I think it that would add interest as well! It'd add another dimension to the story, and if you could make their stories all be related, it'd be really cool. :)

[myanoel10]

Ok! I am going to try to get another chapter out tomorrow. Maybe then I will add a new character.

[roxmorgirl]

Cool! :D