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mustaza

Autumn Leaves

Jun 13, 2011 21:23

Title: Autumn Leaves
Characters/Pairings: Daniel/Charlotte
Summary: Daniel tries again.
Spoilers/Warnings: AU for S5.
Disclaimer: I don’t own LOST.

A/N: Written for valhalla37 at lost_in_108's summer fic exchange, prompt redo (and Massachusetts if you squint). Girl, I know you deserve more than this (and I still owe you the cottage drabble).

( He sees an orange sky above the river )

character: charlotte lewis, pairing: daniel/charlotte, character: daniel faraday, fanfiction, comm: lost_in_108

Comments 5

ozmissage June 14 2011, 18:14:54 UTC

The imagery in this is just stunning. Gorgeous drabble.

mustaza June 16 2011, 22:09:10 UTC

Wow, thanks! :))

valhalla37 June 16 2011, 01:51:42 UTC

Oh wow, this is SO gorgeous and so stunning ... the imagery is incredible (especially an orange sky above the river, leaves slowly falling into the water) and I love how you weave all these commons themes of Daniel's character -- both music and science -- into the drabble as well.

And that it goes from so profoundly sad to so happy -- that it starts with both of their deaths and ends with their new live -- is so amazing! I love it so, SO much -- thank you! :D :D :D

mustaza June 16 2011, 22:13:50 UTC

Yay! I thought the ideas was so overdone, but I'm glad this worked well. Viewing photos of Massachusetts (especifically of the Essex River) is something really inspiring. Besides, the idea of happy endings related to Jughead's explosion is one of my favorite scenarios for Dan & Charlotte <3

It was a pleasure to write this for you ;)

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mustaza June 25 2011, 18:38:29 UTC

Oh, wow. Thanks, that's so flattering... especially because I felt it was repetitive.