Fic: In the Line of Fire (Y)

[dreaminthepast]

Title: In the line of fire (Y)
Author: Sev-chu
Pairing:  Changmin x Jaejoong
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Mob wars are painting the streets of Hong Kong and Japan red with blood ensnaring the rogue cop in its wake. Can Yunho find him in time to save him and is he ready for what he finds? Can the gangs unite to stop the violence or will they tear each other

Comments

[neoreulwonhae]

So freaking hot. *drools* A sweet ending, too. ♥ I'm gonna miss this fic!

[dreaminthepast]

*sops up your drool* xD

I'm glad you liked the ending ♥

I am going to miss it too :C

[be_ddelusionall]

kay, so I just read this whole thing in ... *looks at computer clock* 5 hours ... yeah, five hours. wow.

me likey

I LOVE that you had Junsu topping, and OMG! it was just ... HEEEEEECHUL!!!! *SCREAMS*

but donghae was a bad guy ... I ♥ Donghae ... but i loved the way Changmin resolved it, and I mean, he didn't kill him when Donghae would have.

god, what else do i like about the last 5 hours of reading??? it was intense. I was really worried about Yunho betraying them, and then Junsu with the "i just had sex" look in his eyes when he blew up the building. Oh man. In another life, i can so see Junsu being a bomb-building pyromaniac. I love him so much!!!

and fuck, the JaeMIn ... god, Jae is just ... :Q_________________

and I may or my not have been picturing myself with Yoochun in all of his sexy parts ... :) *giggles* I do love me some Yoochun.

okay, shutting up.
loved it. want more SEQUEL

*hugs you tight* ♥♥♥♥♥

[dreaminthepast]

omg omg omg. Before I even say anything about your comment, I have to say that I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! I have definitely been a long time Stalkerfan of your writing and I promise to start squeeing all over your lj.

Haha, this fic is quite a read all in one go (I think).
xD Junsu is a naturally born top! and I love Heechul so much, I think he makes the perfect crazy mob guy. 8D.

I love Donghae too, but I feel he is slightly unhinged and therefore the perfect choice to be our bad-guy. I was a little uncertain how I was going to end the whole Changmin vs Donghae thing. I really didn't think Changmin was ready to kill his brother, so Junsu's penchant for blowing things up came in handy.

IKR?! Haha, Yunho .... fire... things that go "BOOM" yeah, Junsu can get off on them all. xD

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed/loved the fic! ♥♥♥♥♥

[queen_eddie]

I DLed the PDF and read the story on my iPod yesterday.

I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!

[dreaminthepast]

Excellent! I hope you enjoy. ♥♥♥♥♥

Thank you so much!!

[wordlesslove]

*sigh* if this isn't a great way to come back into the dongbangworld, i don't know what is^^

*fans self* that. was. hot!!! it was hot, and sweet all at the same time~ because jae let min in (in the literal sense too^^)~

*squee* i'm so glad to have been able to read this, from it's amazing start, to the omgilovethis ending☺ i hope i get to read more of your osm fics in the future!

p.s.- HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! (again^^)

[dreaminthepast]

^^, and welcome back. I feel so loved, thank you <3

*helps fan you too* I'm glad you enjoyed it. It just felt like Jae was ready, ready to be loved and share himself again.

I"m just so glad you loved it and took the time to leave all of your wonderful comments. I've definitely started to write again, I just hope I can continue.

Thank you! ^^ <3

[ashleyjanee]

I love this story so much, its not often I read stories of this genre usually they're all have the same sort of plots, but this doesn't and really kept me reading! I'm definitely adding it to my memories, because was so well written abd because in all honesty I'm a MASSIVE JaeMin fan and I freaking love the way you wrote them and portrayed them in your story!

I've been through all of your stories and read all the JaeMin ones and I'm asking please please please write moreof that couple because again you write them really well and because I freaking love them so much~!! <3

[dreaminthepast]

Wow, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the plot, and found it fresh and entertaining. I really love writing JaeMin, both of their personalities and the way they act together is very fun to write.

Haha, I will try my hardest to write more JaeMin. The story I'm working on now I think has some good JaeMin chemistry, but not in a relationship kind of way. More like agitated brothers sent off together to save the world lol.

But, yes, Thank you! <3