Fic: In the Line of Fire (Y)

[dreaminthepast]

Title: In the line of fire (Y)
Author: Sev-chu
Pairing:  Changmin x Jaejoong
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Mob wars are painting the streets of Hong Kong and Japan red with blood ensnaring the rogue cop in its wake. Can Yunho find him in time to save him and is he ready for what he finds? Can the gangs unite to stop the violence or will they tear each other

Comments

[xtooline]

What a great read! I try to avoid starting long fics at night, because I'm almost completely without the self discipline to stop when I ought to go to sleep. Oh, well, I'll just be a zombie today. Great plot, loved the pacing, characterizations of the 4 - Su as pyro particularly effective, I think. And the JaeMin so so very hot! I love your ability to turn a phrase - would have to go back to find the exact quotes, but a couple of particular favorites: describing Min as looking like one part sunshine, three parts evil crime lord and Jae calling him a very sexy parrot.

Thank you again! Now, I'm just going to grin all day...

[dreaminthepast]

I know what you mean, I have the same problem with reading lengthy chaptered fics.

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed the word play.

[xtooline]

A question: is the PDF for this still kicking around somewhere? I'd love to keep it for rereading. Thank you again!

[dreaminthepast]

I'm working on fixing the link!

[ashleyjanee]

I've been a silent fan of your Jaemin stories, but I was going through my 'Subscribed Tags' and re-read all said stories, then decided to comment on this story because it's one of my favoutire stories (it's totally memmed and everything!) I just wanted to say I love this story and that I really hope you write more Jaemin soon!! 8D

[dreaminthepast]

Thank you so much. It's very humbling that this fic is loved so much.

I will try to write more in the future!