fic: Let's Go Make Out Up in the Balcony (Sports Night; Dan/Dana)

[musesfool]

Title: Let's Go Make Out Up in the Balcony
Author: victoria p.
Summary: "You mean, we need to behave like adults and take responsibility for our actions and their consequences?"
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Sorkin's, not mine.
Notes: Thanks to luzdeestrellas for betaing. All remaining errors are mine. Written for the Put the Sports Back in Sports Night ficathon.

Comments

[severuslovesme]

Ok this? *Awesome*

You have made my heart so happy, because there's basically nothing rarer than Sports Night het, and it happens to be one of my all time favorite things.

The banter was so spot on, you captured Dan and Dan's voices really really well! :)

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and thought it sounded like them.

[musesfool]

There really isn't! *G*

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[elishavah]

Aw. With a hearty side of hee, especially (as was mentioned above) for "Sportsmanship got crosschecked to the face by Chris Simon."

[musesfool]

Thank you! I'm kind of fond of that line my own self. *g*

[oriolegirl]

The conservation of cynicism. Excellent! *g*

[musesfool]

Hee! Thank you!

[catwalksalone]

While I think Dan/Dana is a disaster in the making (two crazy people who live for the approval of others trying to build a relationship. Can we say crash and burn?) I liked the way you wrote them, full of promise.

And the beginning banter was very them. May I third the "Sportsmanship" line as a favourite?

[musesfool]

Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you, especially if you're not a fan of the pairing.