Cultural Customs and Diplomatic Dilemmas (Part Two: Avenyn)
Title: Cultural Customs and Diplomatic Dilemmas (Part Two: Avenyn)
Length: About 7 pages in Word
Challenge: N/A
A Golden Cage (Part One) A Golden Cage (Part Two) CC and DD (Part One: Chusel)
Thanks so much to everyone who has been reading this. I don't want to clutter this place, so I'll probably start posting installments in my own journal after the next section (which is written but in desperate need of editing). This one is only somewhat edited, so please be picky - typos, grammar, spelling, whatever you can find, I want to know. (Also, I’m not so sure about the beginning of this...specifically the first five paragraphs, the memory sequence of the balcony, and Avenyn's memories of the soldiers and Healers. Tell me if it does or doesn’t work and if there’s anything that you think would make it work better.)
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Length: About 7 pages in Word
Challenge: N/A
A Golden Cage (Part One) A Golden Cage (Part Two) CC and DD (Part One: Chusel)
Thanks so much to everyone who has been reading this. I don't want to clutter this place, so I'll probably start posting installments in my own journal after the next section (which is written but in desperate need of editing). This one is only somewhat edited, so please be picky - typos, grammar, spelling, whatever you can find, I want to know. (Also, I’m not so sure about the beginning of this...specifically the first five paragraphs, the memory sequence of the balcony, and Avenyn's memories of the soldiers and Healers. Tell me if it does or doesn’t work and if there’s anything that you think would make it work better.)
[down for editing]