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"War Torn" for liebedance

Jul 13, 2011 10:23

Title: War Torn
Author: museme87
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG-13, for language and violence
Wordcount: 480
Warnings: Mention of violence
Summary: Remus can't quite deal with facing Greyback, and Sirius, for all that he tries, can't quite deal with Remus.
Author's Note: Written far too late in the evening for the beautiful liebedance. She requested angst, Remus ( Read more... )

year: 2011, c: remus lupin, rating: pg-13, p: remus/sirius, genre: angst, length: 0-1k, c: sirius black

Comments 9

escribo July 13 2011, 23:32:10 UTC

Ouch! Really beautifully done.

museme87 July 14 2011, 21:05:02 UTC

Thank you!

liebedance July 14 2011, 00:11:31 UTC

Thanks, H! I just adore your writing; you make everything so real. I love the bit about them sitting back to back so that they won't have sex or throw punches. You're exceptionally talented, love.

♥

museme87 July 14 2011, 21:07:36 UTC

Thanks, L! I think I'm not nearly as talented as you think I am. <3

eprime July 14 2011, 06:49:59 UTC

Oh, broken boys. You're killing me, H. Well done.

museme87 July 14 2011, 21:08:10 UTC

Thanks, T! I blame L for broken boys; her request after all.

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museme87 July 19 2011, 20:08:49 UTC

Thank you!

aerosleigh August 2 2011, 03:58:15 UTC

the last sentence is brilliant.
they're so broken and yet so real... I think I'm tearing up a little.
lovely piece of work, this is.

museme87 August 2 2011, 04:43:35 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm quite partial to the last sentence myself. :)