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Fic: Three's A Crowd [ 2/? ]

Nov 11, 2011 18:18

Title: Three's A Crowd
Author: museme87
Pairing(s): Brian/Justin, Ben/Michael, Mel/Lindsay, Ted/Blake, Deb/Carl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Over the course of his and Justin's seven year non-relationship, Brian had never been one to say no to a third party addition. But when the addition is far more permanent and redefines playroom for the worst, Brian thinks ( Read more... )

verse:three's a crowd, pairing:brian/justin, fic:2011, fanfic:qaf

Comments 41

icicle33 November 14 2011, 05:08:49 UTC

Great chapter dear! I love how Brian calls Justin's daughter an urchin and how he's so resentful and jealous of a toddler. Deb was fantastic putting him in his place, and somehow I feel like Sunshine is only playing dumb. Perhaps it's just me, but it seems like he's pretending that everything is in Brian's hands when in actuality, he's orchestrating the whole thing as an elaborate ploy to get Brian back. Either way, I can't wait to read more. = )

museme87 November 14 2011, 15:51:23 UTC

Thank you, love! It's very fun to write Brian being so...Brian, lol. As for who is orchestrating what, you'll have to see! Hee! :) Our Justin has never been entirely innocent, but I think maturity/responsibility has changed him just a bit.

later2nite November 14 2011, 08:14:10 UTC

Wow! This was mesmerizing... very well written and interesting plot-wise, and outstandingly insightful into the B/J dynamic. I know I'm out of order, but going to look for chap 1 right now.

Thanks for the refreshingly good fic. I love Justin being a father. I wrote one also where he and Daphne are parents of a little girl. I always thought he'd make such a good dad! ♥

museme87 November 14 2011, 16:07:04 UTC

Thank you so much! The link to the previous chapters is at the bottom of the fic after the author's note. :)

Justin, I think, would make an excellent dad. It's always nice to see him as one in fics; I confess they're a bit of a guilty pleasure, lol. And I was torn between giving him a son or a daughter, but I finally decided on a girl. I think it's a pretty popular occurrence in BJ kid!fic, but everyone manages to put a unique twist on it.

jizabel91 November 14 2011, 16:56:09 UTC

I am loving this story...the Babylon scene was great. I like that Justin understands Brian and is not pushing him. I felt a little bit sorry for him..... being a single father and living away from his family. I hope that he is planning to come back home and win Brian over. Fantastic work and cannot wait for more.

museme87 November 14 2011, 19:26:50 UTC

Thank you! Justin is in a very sad sort of situation, I agree. Hopefully Brian can make things better for him. :)

pam81 November 14 2011, 22:55:38 UTC

What a beautiful update!
So good to see they're getting close once again ♥

I love how you keep them both so IC. You're doing a fabulous job with this story, thanks ♥

museme87 November 14 2011, 23:09:15 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really happy to hear you think they're IC. It's always something I fret about as I'm writing, especially since I've just started writing QAF fic and am still working on my Brian and Justin voices. :)

I think physically close is very easy for BJ (though I was definitely worried about how you all would receive the sex in this chapter). It's the emotionally close that's going to be the journey of this fic.

akannis November 20 2011, 16:44:19 UTC

Hi there,

I asked for great active WiPs over at getithere a while ago and got recommended this story. Got so many recs that it has taken me a while to get here (bit of a luxury problem... lol). But, wow, I'm glad I finally did. What a great story! I'm hooked!

Your brian feels incredibly real to me, his voice is spot on - good job! Thank you for writing and sharing! I'm looking forward to the next part!

Ann

museme87 November 20 2011, 16:56:08 UTC

Hi, Ann! Thanks for reading and for leaving me such a lovely comment. :) I'm glad you find my Brian spot it; he can be a real challenge to write sometimes, lol! Ch3 is with my beta at the moment, so I don't imagine the wait will be much longer for it.

akannis November 20 2011, 18:17:35 UTC

"Ch3 is with my beta at the moment, so I don't imagine the wait will be much longer for it."

Awesome! I'm a bit jealous of your beta for getting to read it before the rest of us, though. Hehe...

museme87 November 20 2011, 19:19:20 UTC

Oh don't be jealous, lol! Trust me, my rough drafts are usually not so great, so I don't think you guys would want to read it before I've torn it to pieces and built it back up. L is really a saint for doing as much betaing for me as she does.