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@ NAME OF THE COMMUNITY
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@ homeless / psl
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[anonymous]

@ mel0n
~nag (Key)

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

(( this is an old muse that I revived this year and I just want to make sure it wasn't a mistake haha ;; any comments will be deeply appreciated! ))

[woon]

Jongwoon and Kibum haven't had many chances to interact yet, but since you seemed uncertain, I wanted to try to give you a little encouragement. ^^ He seems really great so far and was the first person to reach out to my muse. He is very easy to talk to and I know I'm not the only one who has had a good impression of him so far. Definitely not a mistake in bringing him around. We are just hoping to catch him more so they can get to be better friends~

OP

[anonymous]

(ugh right now I hate not having an LJ for him haha)

Thank you for taking your time to leave me this! This reaching out thing is something I have to try really hard to do, because I'm not as much of a social butterfly as he is. It's a huge encouragement when someone mentions it. As long as I can keep making him a welcoming and outgoing muse, I'm definitely going to keep him around.

I hope the opportunity for a scene presents itself soon!

RE: OP

[woon]

(everyone seems to prefer DW more now though, so its not surprising xD)

You're welcome. ^^ I know it can be hard to reach out to people all the time. I'm looking forward to a chance to scene as well!

[sooyoung]

@ homeless / psl
sooyoung (@ddooyoungie)

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[sooyoung]

Compared to the past Sooyoungs my muse has dealt with (albeit very briefly) I find yours to be my preferred choice now. Silly, almost to the point of unreasonable, but she doesn't cross that line (maybe just sits on it for a while, haha) no, but, it's honestly just really endearing. You have done a good job at giving her layers, many of them! I enjoy reading what impressions she's left on other muses, because it reads truthful and even if I have yet to get there with my muse and yours, I'm looking forward to it - because it seems awesome.

[homie]

@ mel0n
~yaho

@ homeless / psl
homie

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

(i've only recently brought hoya back to the comm life, so anything regarding what i can do better in that vein is much appreciated! if this forum isn't to your liking, jackson has a crit post pinned on his journal here that you can use (and for hoya too, if you want!), or you can pm/ooc on aim. thank you~)

[homie]

ahhhh, this means a lot to me, you have no idea ;; i can say with absolute certainty that the biggest fear i had was having him come off way too over the top, so i've tried my best to give him a good balance--hearing that i've succeeded at least in your eyes makes me feel much better in that regard!!

yeah, i've only been playing him for about four months now, haha. so definitely feeling very encouraged and thank you so, so much for it. ♥ this is super short as far as thank yous go, but i've said pretty much everything else in my comment to you, so. o/

[anonymous]

I will never understand why you're ever nervous when there's a reason beyond your diligence towards your muse that Sunny has been around for so long

[anonymous]

It's been a long time since my muse interacted with yours but I have nothing but good memories and thoughts of her. She was an important friend and I always thought you got her down really brilliantly. And your writing and characterization of her was really fun and good too. Sorry I can't say anything recent since they aren't friends anymore but I thought you should know. Keep going strong. No hard feelings.