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Jun 17, 2015 12:09





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anonymous June 17 2015, 17:09:52 UTC
@ mel0n
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

(( this is an old muse that I revived this year and I just want to make sure it wasn't a mistake haha ;; any comments will be deeply appreciated! ))

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woon June 17 2015, 23:37:01 UTC
Jongwoon and Kibum haven't had many chances to interact yet, but since you seemed uncertain, I wanted to try to give you a little encouragement. ^^ He seems really great so far and was the first person to reach out to my muse. He is very easy to talk to and I know I'm not the only one who has had a good impression of him so far. Definitely not a mistake in bringing him around. We are just hoping to catch him more so they can get to be better friends~

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OP anonymous June 18 2015, 15:55:58 UTC
(ugh right now I hate not having an LJ for him haha)

Thank you for taking your time to leave me this! This reaching out thing is something I have to try really hard to do, because I'm not as much of a social butterfly as he is. It's a huge encouragement when someone mentions it. As long as I can keep making him a welcoming and outgoing muse, I'm definitely going to keep him around.

I hope the opportunity for a scene presents itself soon!

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RE: OP woon June 20 2015, 23:32:13 UTC
(everyone seems to prefer DW more now though, so its not surprising xD)

You're welcome. ^^ I know it can be hard to reach out to people all the time. I'm looking forward to a chance to scene as well!

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colorsigns June 20 2015, 22:56:13 UTC
It definitely wasn't a mistake! 8 ( ... )

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anonymous June 21 2015, 05:07:49 UTC
From someone else who just revived an old muse, I'm extremely grateful to have yours around. I know you don't think you're as outgoing with him as you can be, but you have no idea how welcoming he has been from what I've seen. I can't comment on writing since we haven't scened yet, but I really appreciate how much you try to have him reach out and comment around. My girl was instantly at ease with him and he does hold the charm the real seems to have.

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