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This comment will be super chaotic and all over the place since I'm heavily sleep-deprived, but I still wanted to leave you a comment before I go to bed!
So far I've really enjoyed their interaction and I really appreciate that I get to play out their friendship! Your muse seems solid, from what I got to see so far there are definitely more layers to him and I really enjoy the bits and pieces of narration of his thoughts and feelings you include in your tags. I've never really been an avid fan of Shinee and my knowledge of how he 'should' be is very limited, the few things I know I learned through rping with other Keys over the years of my mun career, so I can't even say whether those 'facts' are legit, though I can say that he does feel very 'Key-like' to me. At least your muse acts and sounds very similar to the way the real appears to act in the videos I've watched of him and Eunji.
Writing wise, there really isn't anything for me to complain about. I enjoy your writing and it's fun to reply and you really aren't slow at all. ♥ If things go well, I'll finally put up our thread tomorrow morning lol. \o/
Overall I hope he'll stay a part of Eunji's life for a really long time and I'm looking forward as to how their friendship will evolve, I really enjoy rping and writing with you. ♥
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