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@ NAME OF THE COMMUNITY
musefied + musefied

@ homeless / psl
musefied + musefied

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[retrospection]

@ PLUGDJ
retrospection

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[retrospection]

i'm pretty terrible at these but i just thought i'd add my two cents and hope this isn't too confusing

[retrospection]

Thank you for this, anon, I really appreciate it! I'm happy to hear I've improved on his characterization because that's what I've been working on since I've started playing him again. It's really easy to assume he's just this... badass rapper while he's actually completely different and I think that was the mistake I made as well when I first started playing him. I hope our muses will get even closer than they already are (I think I know who this is!) and that we can scene more too. ♥

[retrospection]

characterization: i like that you actually got yongguk's real personality and not go by his stage image, which a lot of people tend to go for... he's a sweetheart, right? super caring, too. it shows you do your research so it's nice chatting with him when my muse can. he's cute, charming and it's funny when he gets awkward around girls. i don't know too much about the real but i think you got him on point. :)

writing: i haven't been able to scene with him yet!

praise: really do love the interactions he has with my muse and although it hasn't been very long, i'm really looking forward for them to spend more time together. ♥

[steady]

@ CLOUDAPP
steady

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[tealvapor]

I'm just going to apologize in advance in case this becomes a mess because I'm at work and typing on my phone is not nearly as convenient! Hmm...What do I have to say about soosoo~~ He sucks. :| No, I'm just kidding! *squishes* We really like your Kyungsoo, he has that touch of serious/awkward but is still playful and sweet, which makes him a really good balance. From what I can tell, the real can be very to himself and serious but he's really sweet through small gestures with his members. Your soosoo also seems really caring and that makes Sehun really happy and comfortable. The brat adores him and really enjoys their silly conversations. There's no complaints on my part to be honest. ^^ The only thing Sehun would like is to actually spend more time with him but I'm sure that can easily change. ♥

[steady]

Hehe thank you! ♥

We want Kyungsoo to come across like that - a little to himself but definitely not nonchalant. We want the others to feel like he's there for him without really saying it so I'm glad. And yes! We want to spend more time with Sehun too! Trying to change that actively now~ Sehun's such a lovely cute brat hehe ♥ thank you! If there's ever anything, don't hesitate to let us know~

[imyoonie]

First of all, he is really annoying and terrible. ):

Just kidding! ♥ I thought your nervous post to this was really cute, so I wanted to tease you. Unfortunately, we have not had nearly enough interactions! T_T He is really nice from what I have seen and Kyungsoo is pretty funny, so that's good too. I'm sorry I don't really have crit since we haven't talked much. But hopefully we will get more chances~

[onestar]

@ cloudapp
onestar + pimping

@ rebelbase
imaginaryheights + lgw

[onestar]

i was a little surprised when my muse tried to interact with CAP recently and he acted kinda cold and just blew her off. i can't tell if it was IC or OOC of him because i don't know anything about the real, but it definitely didn't rub us the right way.

[pimping]

I know exactly who this is and the way your muse approached him was really kind of offputting in itself and he really had no desire to interact with her because of it, to be honest.

It is IC for him and it really doesn't matter if it rubs you the wrong way since it was not about you or me but your muse and my muse. So please don't take IC things OOC.

[onestar]

Whoops forgot this part
➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[jsy]

@ homeless
naps

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

If you know any of my other muses, please feel free to comment about them as well!

[jsy]

The very first time my muse spoke to yours, your muse managed to piss him off. Is it IC of Jessica to be arrogant and assuming?

[jsy]

I'm really sorry about that. I didn't mean for her to come off a certain way, but I think I did amplify a part of her that shouldn't have been emphasized at all. I have been working on her and if you don't mind giving her another chance, we would love to try again!

[jsy]

To me, it seems a little difficult to continue a conversation with her. It's a shame, because I wanted my muse to get to know her more, but it felt hard. I don't know if other people have felt this way, and it could have definitely been just a personality clash, but my suggestion would be to work on her chatting skills a little? Maybe try to flesh out conversations more... Anyway, I'm sorry for just this small piece!