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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
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[tealvapor]

I'm just going to apologize in advance in case this becomes a mess because I'm at work and typing on my phone is not nearly as convenient! Hmm...What do I have to say about soosoo~~ He sucks. :| No, I'm just kidding! *squishes* We really like your Kyungsoo, he has that touch of serious/awkward but is still playful and sweet, which makes him a really good balance. From what I can tell, the real can be very to himself and serious but he's really sweet through small gestures with his members. Your soosoo also seems really caring and that makes Sehun really happy and comfortable. The brat adores him and really enjoys their silly conversations. There's no complaints on my part to be honest. ^^ The only thing Sehun would like is to actually spend more time with him but I'm sure that can easily change. ♥

[steady]

Hehe thank you! ♥

We want Kyungsoo to come across like that - a little to himself but definitely not nonchalant. We want the others to feel like he's there for him without really saying it so I'm glad. And yes! We want to spend more time with Sehun too! Trying to change that actively now~ Sehun's such a lovely cute brat hehe ♥ thank you! If there's ever anything, don't hesitate to let us know~

[imyoonie]

First of all, he is really annoying and terrible. ):

Just kidding! ♥ I thought your nervous post to this was really cute, so I wanted to tease you. Unfortunately, we have not had nearly enough interactions! T_T He is really nice from what I have seen and Kyungsoo is pretty funny, so that's good too. I'm sorry I don't really have crit since we haven't talked much. But hopefully we will get more chances~

[steady]

Gah! I had a little heart attack when I saw the notification in my inbox haha. U-U

We really haven't had a lot of time to play together and I'd love to change that~ but I'm glad from the glimpses you've gotten that he doesn't seem wildly ooc. Thank you!

[imyoonie]

I'm sorry for trolling you there. xD It was just a good opening~
You're very welcome and we're looking forward to seeing your muse around!

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We really like what we've seen from Kyungsoo so far. He seems to be very well balanced as far as his personality goes. He's someone my muse can talk to when he needs it, but he can joke around with him easily as well. Especially lately ♥ I don't have anything else to add but we hope we can actually scene with Kyungsoo soon instead of just chatting, so we can see a bit more of him.

This probably isn't helpful but it needed to be said~

[steady]

I think it's helpful! Haha. Thank you ♥ it's good to know I'm doing something right! Let's scene soon, mysterious stranger~

[shutdowns]

i'm barely awake so i'm sorry if this comment is going to make no sense and be all over the place! first and foremost, we absolutely adore your kyungsoo to bits! he's absolutely fantastic. his playful quips with jonghyun are probably one of the most enjoyable conversations that he gets to have. but sometimes when he swears, it really catches us off guard and unsure how to respond and i can't picture that as something as kyungsoo would do even if sometimes he does get frustrated and playfully angry with his bandmates, but i haven't been keeping up with exo for awhile so then again i'm not really sure if there have been new instances to say otherwise! you have that explosive, defensive and sometimes threatening puppy stance with the snark replies and lame jokes right on pat that i see with the real, but i also felt like he as in the real, had a sensitive bit about him as well that yours didn't seem to show much, but then his reactions to the lawsuit and how he still tried to keep morale up with his ridiculous animals pictures i think

[steady]

Ah, yes! Thank you! The swearing thing, actually, is something I'm still a bit iffy about. It came about from watching Exo's Showtime because there's a bit when Luhan and Kyungsoo are going through a haunted house and Kyungsoo is like "I feel like I'm going to curse" and I kind of wanted to see how it would be with that. Of course, he is talking to a sunbae and a hyung, so I understand if it's weird haha. But we feel really comfortable with your Jonghyun and I wanted to see if you were comfortable with a relationship like that too. It was really just something I was trying to flesh out so I'm actually glad you spoke about it! As for the sensitive bit, Kyungsoo to me feels like a really guarded person. Since I didn't see him saying much about the lawsuit until their latest encore stage (and now the last concert date) I didn't really know how to handle it. But I'm glad it worked out well the way I did.

Thank you so much for this! I really appreciate it ;;