#136 [FIC] - LM.C - Don't leave me

[murderis]

Title: Don’t leave me
Chapter: oneshot
Author: murderis  
Pairing: Maya/Aiji (one-sided)
Genre: Angst? Don’t really know. Drabble.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Lots of drama. :D
Disclaimer: I own just story and my imagination.
Summary: Aiji has to leave to join a band. Maya doesn’t want him to.
Comments: I know it sucks. Didn’t even read over when I finished this. But I

Comments

[erikaoi]

So sad they have to seperate.sad story.

[murderis]

Well, I wanted it to be sad. ): Thanks for reading~ :3

[teru]

Maybe because I'm partial to Maya, or maybe because I'm currently PMSing like a bitch and am therefore mood swing-y, but this fucking drabble depressed the ever loving fuck out of me. Not cool brah, not cool.

It was cute though. In a sad way. And I wanna hug Maya now but somehow this works in my head. Aiji's indifference and all. Good job. ♥

[murderis]

Oopsie. Sorry for that.

Aww. Thank you~! :33

[fae_dreamdance]

First let me say very good job. Overall. ^_^ It was short but no less sorrowful and expressive for it. I felt the pain Maya was feeling and I was able to envision what was happening perfectly because of how you described it.

What I liked most was when Aiji came with the umbrella--maybe its just me but I find symbolism in just that moment. He is carrying this umbrella, momentarily shielding Maya from his own pain, just for the fact that he is there, just as the umbrella shields Maya from the rain. But the umbrella is only temporary relief, much like the fact that Aiji is still living. I adore that.

Epic--just epic. ^_^ Great job. :D

-J

[fae_dreamdance]

That Aiki is leaving, not living. >_< Oops.

[murderis]

Yay. I did good after all. :D

Nice noticing, I had that idea in mind, but didn't really know if I expressed it right. :/

Thank you~! :333