[fic] Disrupted Monotony

[mujakinotsubasa]

I put the doujin on hold to finish off this particular muse. Was nursing it for several days. Half way through I got stuck though, and only finished it just now. I'm sure there are stylistic discrepancies in this fic - but I tried. Getting stuck in the middle affects my writing a lot. -__-;;

Title:  Disrupted Monotony
Pairing: 10051 - hints of 4851

Comments

[piogge]

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

That was amazing, supaface!

[mujakinotsubasa]

I need to find out how to do that heart thing eventually.

DD: I got sick of it half way through though ;__;

[glasssubway]

Heehee.Yay

Byakuran's wise to their game, LOL! I loved it XD

[mujakinotsubasa]

... XD; You seem happy that Byakuran knows.

I dunno why this idea hit me, really. It was just one of those things when it suddenly appears in my head and I can't shake it away >__>; I felt sorry for Spanner and Shou-chan the whole time writing this XD;

And it was hard writing Byakuran D8 ;__;

[glasssubway]

It implies blatant voyeurism on Byakuran's part, which makes me happy XD

I like the way you write Spanner! And how you subtly showed how annoying Byakuran was being

I haven't written Byakuran in awhile, but now I want to...

[mujakinotsubasa]

XD you like voyeur!Byakuran then? Well, what I was trying to imply was that Shouichi was moaning Spanner's name in his sleep while Byakuran was there with him after they did xxx >__>; but sure XD; Voyeurism is cool too~

Go ahead and write! I'm sure it'll turn out amazing <333

[scareless]

Reading cuz waterkairi linked me, if she doesn't review it's because she is a horrible person. ♥

But. Ahahaa. Poor, poor, Shou-chan. You know he's the one who's gonna get punished for it later. The boy has to put up with so much, haha.

[mujakinotsubasa]

XD; I ended up torturing the poor boy, didn't I? [is evil]

Byakuran makes a good terrorist

[scareless]

Indeed. He's fucked now, in both senses of the word. <3

[mujakinotsubasa]

[off topic]

I had to squint a bit to read what they were saying in your previous icon XDDDD It makes me laugh.

[izelmecatl]

Oh shi-! it was great! I love the whole scene you wrote here..a very interesting situation indeed~!

I look forward to more stuff form you~

[mujakinotsubasa]

^-^ Thank you~ I'll be turning out another fic soon I hope, if this one didn't burn my inspiration out too badly~

[waterkairi]

I am so not a horrible person, Kelly. D;

SO NOSY, BYAKURAN. Jesus, of all the things to visit in the base for.... hahahaha. XD

Wonderful job; hope to read more from you. :]

[mujakinotsubasa]

XD;;; I hope I didn't butcher him too much >___>;; [tried her best]

Thank you ^^; And I'll try to finish another asap~