[fic] Disrupted Monotony

[mujakinotsubasa]

I put the doujin on hold to finish off this particular muse. Was nursing it for several days. Half way through I got stuck though, and only finished it just now. I'm sure there are stylistic discrepancies in this fic - but I tried. Getting stuck in the middle affects my writing a lot. -__-;;

Title:  Disrupted Monotony
Pairing: 10051 - hints of 4851

Comments

[glasssubway]

Heehee.Yay

Byakuran's wise to their game, LOL! I loved it XD

[mujakinotsubasa]

... XD; You seem happy that Byakuran knows.

I dunno why this idea hit me, really. It was just one of those things when it suddenly appears in my head and I can't shake it away >__>; I felt sorry for Spanner and Shou-chan the whole time writing this XD;

And it was hard writing Byakuran D8 ;__;

[glasssubway]

It implies blatant voyeurism on Byakuran's part, which makes me happy XD

I like the way you write Spanner! And how you subtly showed how annoying Byakuran was being

I haven't written Byakuran in awhile, but now I want to...

[mujakinotsubasa]

XD you like voyeur!Byakuran then? Well, what I was trying to imply was that Shouichi was moaning Spanner's name in his sleep while Byakuran was there with him after they did xxx >__>; but sure XD; Voyeurism is cool too~

Go ahead and write! I'm sure it'll turn out amazing <333

[glasssubway]

*laughs* NO, I completely know what you meant. There's what you wrote, and then there's the way my mind takes it and twists it. So I read that, and then I was like "...I bet Byakuran went and checked out what they had been up to..." and so voyeurism!

[mujakinotsubasa]

XD! I actually was toying with the idea of a threesome if Byakuran actually went and watched Shouichi and Spanner, but couldn't see Byakuran getting along with Spanner at all, much less sharing someone as cute as Shou-chan. ^^;

[glasssubway]

*bursts out laughing* Spanner would probably shoot Byakuran while they were in bed together, as they fought over who could top Shou-chan XD

[mujakinotsubasa]

lmao! I can totally see that except Byakuran would be badass and pwn Spanner first >___> Because he totally would :

[glasssubway]

He'd probably preach to Spanner about the benefits of using that cherry-flavored "body lotion" I wrote about over traditional oil in Moscas as he forced Spanner to submit XD

[mujakinotsubasa]

XDD True that! Poor Spanner has no knowledge in that kind of thing~ [pets him] He's cute that way though.

[glasssubway]

I disagree. See that smirk he has in that icon of yours? He's a mechanic; he knows exactly what lubricant is for XD

[mujakinotsubasa]

LOL XDDDD He probably does, but he would only use machine lubricant instead of the normal kind~ And who knows what machine oil would do to poor Shou-chan's ass >___>

[glasssubway]

Stain it black XD

Sorry, I have to go to bed now XD I have homework and other things to do tomorrow so I can go hang out w/ my peeps

Pretty please go read that thing that consumed my life for a week. I will send you virtual hangars of flowers. Also I need crit like Shou-chan needs to be shipped with Spanner or Byakuran to the EXTREME!

[mujakinotsubasa]

WILL DO XD I was reading it and at the same time answering comments so I'm kinda distracted <3333 Will leave feedback as soon as I finish~

[kayuuko]

omg... now I totally want to see such a fic LOL

Loved the one above btw even though I thought the end was pretty evil *laughs* At the same time amusing ^^

Love how you portrayed Byakuran and Spanner XD And Sho-chan too (he seemed so... I don't know... nervous... when he heard that Byakuran is down there lol)