Food Memory

[muchtooarrogant]

LJ Idol, Week Six

Comments

[baxaphobia]

What a fun and sweet story! It made me grin from ear to ear!

[muchtooarrogant]

Thank you! It was lots of fun to write too. Some pieces take so much effort to write that I feel drained when I'm done, but this one wasn't like that.

Dan

so true

[sikander7]

It really hits home the things that kids like to do with parents. And I loved the way you took a simple thing, the potato chip, and turned it into a key part of the story.

Re: so true

[muchtooarrogant]

My kids often inspire the writing in my journal, just because the stories end up being so crazy sometimes. LOL

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Dan

[n3m3sis42]

I think this is my favorite entry of yours so far! And I love what you did with the prompt.

I cannot wait until Max is old enough to do stuff like Jungle Gym! Although Mommy and Daddy are already on the old side, so it's going to be rough on us. Sometimes I lie on my back and let him jump/stomp on my tummy and he thinks it is hi-larious. It hurts, but it's a small price to pay for baby giggles.

[muchtooarrogant]

LOL Baby giggles rule!

I'm glad you liked the story that much. It was great fun to write!

Dan

[similiesslip]

Aw..this was great.
And you are not the only parent whose "playing around" can lead to owies:(

Don't feel bad.

[muchtooarrogant]

Oh, I know, about the owies, although I do tend to be a lot more rough and tumble than their Mom. Still though, isn't that what Dad's are for? LOL

Thanks so much for reading, and glad you liked.

Dan

[judo100]

"Dude," I objected, "I was just lying on the floor."

Yeah, we've heard THAT excuse before....

[muchtooarrogant]

Hahahaha, what, my innocent routine doesn't convince you?

Dan

[judo100]

Never, my dear. You are transparent. Totally.

[muchtooarrogant]

LOL