Behind the Song [Care] Refrain II

[muchie05]

Verse I: “I think I love someone now. . ."
Verse II: “Baby, , , that was sweet of you"
Refrain I: "Wake up sleepy head"
Chorus I: "He realized that he cannot live without Kame"

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Creating Refrain II

He got home, placed his keys at the nearby cabinet, he opened his ref to get a cold soda, he paced his kitchen and transferred to his living room and

Comments

[puffie_hanchan]

it's sad.... and i remember a saying that says 'the hardest thing to do is to watch the person you love, love someone else...'

ah~ unrequited love.

love it (^^) *hugs*

[muchie05]

AHHH!!! *sad*
~tell me about it! been there and it really sucks... T_T
and i think the hardest is knowing that they got married and is happily expecting a child!!! uwaaaa TT_TT

*hug me tightee* U_U

[muchie05]

*is now gluing all pieces together*
~aww i love how you summed it up, you totally got my point here on this fic... XDDD

the hardest i think is to love someone loving another and trying to love that other person when you know someone is loving you on the side! U_U *now i am sad* T_T

gambarimasu! XD
love you! <333

[jillian_14]

wah~~ this fic is good or what... i wish you could update soon... so bad that 2 more verse and it will be the end of it.. T.T

i wish jin and kame could sort things out... ohhh~~ i can't wait for the next chapter.. i want to know how would jin confess to kame and what reaction will kame make.. or how will react on jin's confession... WAHH!! can't wait for it... hahaha!!

~thanks for the update... (^_^)
i wish after care.. it will be kizuna.. hahaha!!

-hyper mood-

[muchie05]

i will update soon, the remaining verses are already plotted and just need some proof reading!XDD ~though i will not tell you yet if this will be a good or bad fic with regards to the ending.. ^^o *im an S type* LOL

haha its really hard to write a fic based on songs, coz you cannot control the things that you want to do it should be at least related to the song verses.. XDD

*hugs*
thankies for keeping watch over this fic!
mwahzzz

[jillian_14]

ah~~ good.. i can't wait to read it... (^_^)
wah~~ too bad you'll not gonna tell me... T.T
oh~~ well, i'll just wait for it.. after all, it's best that the readers don't know the ending yet.. it gives such an exciting/eagerness feeling for the readers.. hehehe..

yeah.. really hard.. but you did a great job on doing it.. hehehe...

*hugs* your welcome... it's really nice to read your fics...

[muchie05]

*shyly blushing*
ehhh i consider this as my baby fic so hearing things like that,, ehhh it makes me feel loved loved loved! ^^o
..you will surely get more excitement if you havent known yet the ending so,, patience patience! ^^o

Thankies!!! *ILU* <333

[dephi]

Huwee...
I'm late! Sooo late..
Hukzzz.. Poor jinjin.. I pity him so much.. T.T

Update soon! *pleaded eyes*

[muchie05]

ur not that late! XD
*points* i love your icon! XD

lets group hug jin! XD he needs that now! ^^o

^^o ~no need for pleading eyes,, i will update soon as theres 2 more verses left for this! XDD
*hugs u tight*