Seuls - Chapter 6

Jan 14, 2009 09:42

Title: Seuls
Author: mtemplar
Rating: Adult
Characters: The Doctor (Tenth), Rose Tyler
Disclaimer: I do not own 'Doctor Who' and am making no profit from this fanfiction.
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Graphic Sex, Graphic Violence, Romance
Spoilers: Set mid Series 2
Author's Notes: This story follows the events in To Have And Not To Hold (first chapter of ( Read more... )

fic, tenth doctor fic, fic - seuls

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tempusdominus10 January 14 2009, 17:04:42 UTC
GRRRRG. MY POOR DOCTOR!!! THios is turning out sooooo sweeeet! Keep going, please god!

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mtemplar_fic January 14 2009, 18:44:18 UTC
*laughs and adds the second suitcase full of bad*

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tempusdominus10 January 14 2009, 18:45:29 UTC
WOOOOH! I love that line! I hope he usses it as Eleven...its a real...hot...totty.hehe

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mtemplar_fic January 14 2009, 19:12:51 UTC
Eh, I think it should be restricted to Ten. Sort of like Nine and 'fantastic'! *grins*

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mtemplar_fic January 14 2009, 18:45:38 UTC
*grins* Nope - not good at all.

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Prin Seuls Ch 6 Comments 1 of 1 principia January 14 2009, 17:30:52 UTC
"My barriers, Rose," he said with a pleading look in his eyes. "I can't control them around you, and if they were to go down -"

*major flashbacks to the balcony in TCI*

He blinked at her, his eyes becoming a bit more focused. "The Fendahl was a supposedly a myth of my people, Rose. Something existing only to frighten children with, but it's not. It's real."

Like the Toclafane, only not repurporsed tot.

"That's right. The evolutionary process turned in on itself and created a being capable of absorbing all energy. The ultimate psychevore, if you will." He paused, swallowing hard. "In your very own neighborhood, in fact."

He seems to be clearing up pretty nicely here. *arches eyebrow*

Rose paused in her search, looking incredulously at a toy wind-up mouse from the Doctor's coat pocket in her hand.

No wonder he wanted it back in TDD! Awww.

"No," he said, looking fatigued again. "The planet that used to exist between the orbits of Mars and Jupiter…

Next thing you know, he’s going to have to explain Mondas to her!

"I thought I ( ... )

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Re: Prin Seuls Ch 6 Comments 1 of 1 roxyk630 January 14 2009, 17:34:14 UTC
Refusing to stop the Daleks at the point of their creation was your fault. The supernova failing to kablooey the Fendahl skull? Not your fault.

EXACTLY. Wholeheartedly agree.

OMG! BTW? I never told you -or did I? I got the poster! *GLEE* (I think you saw my post about the package -if not I can link it) THANK YOU! *hughug lovelove*

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Re: Prin Seuls Ch 6 Comments 1 of 1 mtemplar_fic January 14 2009, 18:54:12 UTC
He seems to be clearing up pretty nicely here. *arches eyebrow*

I'd like to say something clever like 'he's drawing on Rose's strength via the bond', but I just needed to get some exposition in. Fendahl is giving him a breather - it's up to something else.

Refusing to stop the Daleks at the point of their creation was your fault. The supernova failing to kablooey the Fendahl skull? Not your fault.

He didn't exactly hang around to make sure it was destroyed, so in his mind? His fault.

So the Fendahl just got lucky - it doesn’t know, in fact, that there was only one TARDIS left that it could have caught?

It did just get lucky, yes - but Fendahl is now aware that there's just one TARDIS and one TL left.

Note to Rose: add ‘playing with the Doctor’s pet phallic object in front of him’ to the list of don’ts.

Yep - Ten's bombarded barriers are shaky enough as is right now.

I can’t imagine using Emergency Protocol 1 and turning up on the Powell Estate with the future cast of Oliver! would work out too well.Jackie would no doubt Not ( ... )

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Re: Prin Seuls Ch 6 Comments 1 of 1 principia January 14 2009, 19:35:41 UTC
Yep - Ten's bombarded barriers are shaky enough as is right now.

*Rose, I really need you to quit extending and shortening the sonic sc... sc... please.*

That would be interesting, wouldn't it? Who would win? *ponders*

Indeed!

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roxyk630 January 14 2009, 17:30:59 UTC
AUGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Totally needs to make you some icons BTW*

AND... more
AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH! ANOTHER WEEK!? SERIOUSLY!? *DIES* You're killin me Smalls!

:3 Love it though. Another amazing chapter as usual. You always put me in the most stressfull "OMG WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO!" situations. It's like watching the show... but every week... wait... that IS like watching the show. Just... reading...*grin*

SO? NEXT WEDNESDAY AGAIN RIGHT?! I can wait a week... I can wait a week *repeats*

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mtemplar_fic January 14 2009, 18:58:42 UTC
*Totally needs to make you some icons BTW*

For? I'm still hoping you'll do that picture! *grins*

You're killin me Smalls!

*is confuzled*

wait... that IS like watching the show.

Old school show, right? And yes, next Wednesday barring any major complications.

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roxyk630 January 14 2009, 19:02:16 UTC
XD: I'll definitely do the picture... I just need my art programs to work. The new computer has Vista... and CS2 is so far proving uncompatible. BUT. :3 I'll make it happen. ;)

Icon's with Fehndal :D

"You're killin me, Smalls!" - From the Sandlot <33333333333333

Either one. Both? :3 It's like watching the show! CLIFFHANGERS!

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mtemplar_fic January 14 2009, 19:14:19 UTC
The flappy gold lady or the wiggle-worms? *grins*

Either one. Both? :3 It's like watching the show! CLIFFHANGERS!

Oh, this one wasn't that bad, was it?

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lostwolfchats January 14 2009, 17:48:29 UTC
EAK!!!!!!!!!!!

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mtemplar_fic January 14 2009, 19:00:05 UTC
Yeah, Fendahl = Not Good.

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