The Right Road - Chapter Eight

[msgenevieve]

Title: The Right Road (8/9)
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows, Veronica Donovan, Frank Tancredi, various original characters
Rating: This chapter? I'd say R to be on the safe side.
Genre: AU, Non-Epilogue-Compliant, Alternate Reality
Length: 6,723 words

Comments

[lizparker6]

OMG, You are killing me!!! I didnt even have the time to review your last awesome chapter, and CHAPTER 8 ALREADY????

*iz ded yet not that ded as to not being able to read this little gem*

ps - I absolutely love you!

[msgenevieve]

*blushes*

You know how it is - if you don't post it when it's done, you'll just keep messing with it, lol! *g* I'm so glad you liked it.

[burntcircles]

I see that you're going to take care of that stupid little tumor thing once and for all. Good.
Thanks for this, msgen.
*hugs you tight*

[msgenevieve]

*hugs you back*

Five minutes of research told me that the tumor they'd chosen to give Michael was not only benign, but caused none of the symptoms they'd given him. Made me even more GRRRR, but I thought, 'hey, you've said this is what he had, so that's easy to fix, thanks!'

[burntcircles]

Okay, done reading.

Wow.

The humour, the UST, the way you deftly deal with canon--you have my undying admiration.

[msgenevieve]

Thank you so, so much. This was a big chapter and it caused me a bit of grief, what with all the explaining the Crap Wot I Hated, so I'm so glad you liked the outcome!

[gennagurl]

just wow :)

i wanna cry i miss them so much!!

[msgenevieve]

I know, I know. This is why we must keep writing the fic, yes? Thanks for reading!

[purplemoongrl]

*at work being sneaky LOL*

Love the Starbucks-aliases, Sara staring a.k.a. the checking out of the yum yum (I always love that in your fics) and the summing him up is my fav part.
Nice guy. Tall. Amazing eyes. Smart. Polite. Loves his family. Cares about the underprivileged in their community. Possibly shy. Beautiful smile, good laugh. Possible deep-seated emotional issues due to childhood trauma. Great shoulders.

HELL YES!!!!

The brain tumor makes me uneasy but that is just me and my issues. I have faith that you will not torture us with that.

nobody's perfect
There are exceptions, Jen. *G*

The kiss. What can I say? It is perfect

I am so glad that you have the inspiration to write again.
*hugs you*

[msgenevieve]

Thank YOU very much, Mo, for letting me force rough drafts of these things on you and demanding you read them when you've got 447 other things to do. *g*

The more I write, the easier it is to dismiss the canon ending, so yes, I'm very glad I'm writing again, too!

Very happy you liked the kiss - for me, it felt right for them to go that far and then go, "Woah, okay, standing out in the open, it's very late and maybe we both need a few days to digest everything that's happened but just so you know, I'd really like to take this further very soon." :)